Bewafa Aasman:Share: Poetry of Pain

abhi bhi zinda hun

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Aie aasman tune kisko diya hai thikana ?

Baadal bhi toot kar dharati par barsa,
Ood ood parinda bhi basere ko tarasa !!

Boolandi hain teri tere niche hain dharti,
Tujhe chhune ke liye yeh duniya hain marti !!

Tu na mila hain kisi ko na milega kisi ko,
Yeh bhed, Aie duniya tu samjhega kabhi to !!

Kitne ghar ujde hain kitne sapne toote hain,
Tujhe paane ke liye kitne apne chhoote hain !!

Aie duniya ke maalik tera aasman bewafa hain,
Kabhi bhi zinda kisi ko yeh milta kaha hain !!

Duniya tu khush rah jo bhi mila hain jo bhi tera jahan hain,
Sadiya bit gayi fir bhi dekh kaha tu aur kaha aasman hain !!


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Bewafa Aasman

«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2010, 11:29:38 AM »

achhi koshish ki magar kuchh adhur si lagti hai.
please complete it.abhi ji.


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abhi bhi zinda hun

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Re: Bewafa Aasman

«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 12:43:02 PM »

Dhanyavad Suresh Ji. Aapne sahi kaha. Maine puri kavita darj nahi ki thi. Ab kuchh aur panktiyon ke sath aapko puri lage.


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Anshumali

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Re: Bewafa Aasman

«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 05:08:50 PM »

Quote from: abhi bhi zinda hun on September 19, 2010, 07:03:08 AM

aapki tehreer ke sabhi khayal bahut umdaa lage mujhe... bahut khoob ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....


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