dard mein jeene Se

by saahill on March 12, 2011, 09:01:01 AM
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yaad ata hai tera lagana muje seene se .
Zakham hain gehre meRe dil mein chot dene se . Chahta hoon mar hi jaun  itne dard mein jeene se ,
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2011, 09:48:30 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Saahil ji,do lines mein kafi kuch kahe diya aapne,great work,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2011, 09:50:33 AM »
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keep writing... nice try...
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2011, 10:39:27 AM »
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kya dard hai sahilji..........
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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2011, 11:07:38 AM »
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dard to dard hai magar bohut haseen  hai . Zakham hain dil mein or namak lagaati nazneen hai.
 
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wah.....khub hai...
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2011, 11:31:57 AM »
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dekho to haseena kaise muskura rahi hai, ek dil jale ko muskura ke jala rahi hai
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2011, 11:33:39 AM »
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ji hamari mirch wali post aapka reply hai........
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