dil ka shor

by aayushi on October 18, 2011, 03:29:17 PM
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nam ankhon ka dhundhlapan,
akelepan ki chubhan,
dil ki tadpan,
sath chalta sunapan,
bina asha h dhadkati dhadkan,
pyar ka andhapan,
tili me rogan,
duao ka anshan,
gunaho ki chilman,
ruh ka pakpan,
parayo ka apnapan,
uski sltnt k lekhan k silsile
chale ja rhe h,
aj ye ansu bahe ja rhe h..........
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2011, 04:20:59 PM »
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gud work--

lekin kuch shabd smjh se pare rahe mere lie sad5

keep writing
nd keep coming Usual Smile

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2011, 05:03:00 PM »
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Quote from: aayushi on October 18, 2011, 03:29:17 PM
nam ankhon ka dhundhlapan,
akelepan ki chubhan,
dil ki tadpan,
sath chalta sunapan,
bina asha h dhadkati dhadkan,
pyar ka andhapan,
tili me rogan,
duao ka anshan,
gunaho ki chilman,
ruh ka pakpan,
parayo ka apnapan,
uski sltnt k lekhan k silsile
chale ja rhe h,
aj ye ansu bahe ja rhe h..........
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