eik na eik din

by nadia brohi on April 19, 2010, 12:56:31 PM

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nadia brohi

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Eik na eik din bicharde gay ye maloom tha humain,
Eik na eik din milain-gay ye ghoman tha humain.

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riyaz106

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Re: eik na eik din

«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2010, 06:10:32 AM »

Bahot achha likha hai Nadia ji. Bas zara spelling par bhi dhyan dene ki zaroorat hai. Agar is tarah likha jaaye to shayad aapko theek lage:

Ek na ek din bichhdain-gay ye maloom tha humain,
Ek na ek din milain-gay ye guman tha humain.


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nadia brohi

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Re: eik na eik din

«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2010, 11:38:43 AM »

ghalti to hogahe spelling mai


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