@~@~@~@~GAZAL~@~@~@~@~@

by shad on May 31, 2010, 03:15:59 PM
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Faila ker daman ham tere muhabbat khuda se mange hai,
Mat puchen shabbe hezer me ham ketna kaise jage hai.
Reshto ko hamesha bahut he sahej ker rakhna tum
Ye reshte to resham se bhi jyada kachche dhage hai.
Mushkelun se ghabra ker tum rashte me na ruko SHAD
Tere manzel ka neshan e mukam to abhi bahot aage
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2010, 11:16:51 PM »
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bahot achhi koshish ki hai aaap ne janaab. thodi si lafzaon ke talaffuz main chook hogai hai. faila=phaila, hezar=hijar ,jyada=ziyada,yeh urdu ke alfaz hain ,ok keep writing,aapke khyal masha Allah bahot khoob hai
Quote from: shad on May 31, 2010, 03:15:59 PM
Faila ker daman ham tere muhabbat khuda se mange hai,
Mat puchen shabbe hezer me ham ketna kaise jage hai.
Reshto ko hamesha bahut he sahej ker rakhna tum
Ye reshte to resham se bhi jyada kachche dhage hai.
Mushkelun se ghabra ker tum rashte me na ruko SHAD
Tere manzel ka neshan e mukam to abhi bahot aage
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2010, 08:00:43 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya janab
Aayenda mai khayal karunga ke english me bhi sahe likh sakun
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2010, 08:30:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob Shad ji.beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2010, 08:24:27 PM »
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