humne gham ka jaam

by saahill on June 06, 2011, 03:28:04 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 761 times)
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 19 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 18617
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
Reply with quote
na kehna humein sharabi yun dekh ke kadam larhkharhate hue

humne bewafai ke gham ka jaam piya hai .sambhalne mein thoda wapt lagega
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Jaam by Raj in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
JAAM by Raj in Shayri-E-Dard
Jaam mein undaila Hai Aaj Apna Gham Main ne... by Aryaan in Shayri-E-Dard
Jaam pe jaam pilaye jaa saqi... by daljeet_faqeer in Kaifiyaat-ae-maye
humne gham ka jaam by saahill in Share: Poetry of Pain
Satish Shukla
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 51
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
25 days, 6 hours and 16 minutes.

Posts: 1862
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2011, 07:14:29 AM »
Reply with quote

Saahill Ji,

Bahut khoob..achchha laga..kahte rahiye..
aur achchhe Hindi/Urdu poets ko padhate rahiye
manzil qareeb hee hai..

Apna ek she'r aapki nazr kar raha hoon..

  "manzil ka kya, mile na mile, kisko hai khabar
   khush hooN ke maiqade ka pata mil gayaa mujhe"

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
Logged
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 19 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 18617
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2011, 07:38:07 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukrya satish ji hum koshish karenge
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 07:29:52 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.086 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer