*****Intzaar ....sirf unka ******

by kritika sharma on November 18, 2010, 05:04:51 AM
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Jinhe Chaha raat din toot kar humne
Jinke aane ka kiya har pal intzaar

Wo aaye to hum muskura na sake
Chah kar bhi apne aanshun chupa na sake

unki baahoin main rehne ka kitna aarman tha
Hum apni mahoobat ko ye jata bhi na sake

kese kehte unhe ki hum unke bina ji nahi skte
jabki wo phir luate hi hume chod jaane ke liye the

hum itne bebas ho gaye unki baatoin se
ki Ek pal or unse Rukne ke liye kah na Sake

Na rok sake unhe apne paas or na hi kah sake
Ki Hum apni aakhiri saans tak unka intzaar karenge ....
intzaar ...sirf unka intzaar ........ love9 crybaby2 love9
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2010, 06:34:39 AM »
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bahut badhiya peshkash he kritika ji...

dher saari daad..

yunhi likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2010, 07:37:50 AM »
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Shukriya ......abhi ji  happy3
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2010, 09:02:05 AM »
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Wah Kritikaji ek aur dil-chashp rachana aapki.....Pyaar aur Dard ka anokha izhaar... Applause Clapping Smiley

Dil mai uth rahe they hazaaron tufaan
Tujhe dekh kay aayee they kai ufffaan

Pahuncha na de tujhe koi dard mere aansoo
Humne baandh liye aankhon par apne Baandh

Quote from: kritika sharma on November 18, 2010, 05:04:51 AM
Jinhe Chaha raat din toot kar humne
Jinke aane ka kiya har pal intzaar

Wo aaye to hum muskura na sake
Chah kar bhi apne aanshun chupa na sake

unki baahoin main rehne ka kitna aarman tha
Hum apni mahoobat ko ye jata bhi na sake

kese kehte unhe ki hum unke bina ji nahi skte
jabki wo phir luate hi hume chod jaane ke liye the

hum itne bebas ho gaye unki baatoin se
ki Ek pal or unse Rukne ke liye kah na Sake

Na rok sake unhe apne paas or na hi kah sake
Ki Hum apni aakhiri saans tak unka intzaar karenge ....
intzaar ...sirf unka intzaar ........ love9 crybaby2 love9
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2010, 09:17:40 AM »
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Quote from: kritika sharma on November 18, 2010, 05:04:51 AM
Jinhe Chaha raat din toot kar humne
Jinke aane ka kiya har pal intzaar

Wo aaye to hum muskura na sake
Chah kar bhi apne aanshun chupa na sake

unki baahoin main rehne ka kitna aarman tha
Hum apni mahoobat ko ye jata bhi na sake

kese kehte unhe ki hum unke bina ji nahi skte
jabki wo phir luate hi hume chod jaane ke liye the

hum itne bebas ho gaye unki baatoin se
ki Ek pal or unse Rukne ke liye kah na Sake

Na rok sake unhe apne paas or na hi kah sake
Ki Hum apni aakhiri saans tak unka intzaar karenge ....
intzaar ...sirf unka intzaar ........ love9 crybaby2 love9





Bahut khoob kritika ji...
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2010, 10:45:01 AM »
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bahut umda Kriti jii...
subhan-allah..
likhti rahiye yun hi ..God bless u:)
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2010, 03:20:26 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAMIKA on November 18, 2010, 09:02:05 AM
Wah Kritikaji ek aur dil-chashp rachana aapki.....Pyaar aur Dard ka anokha izhaar... Applause Clapping Smiley

Dil mai uth rahe they hazaaron tufaan
Tujhe dekh kay aayee they kai ufffaan

Pahuncha na de tujhe koi dard mere aansoo
Humne baandh liye aankhon par apne Baandh


thanks anaamika ji .
and bahut khoob likha hai aapne !!
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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2010, 03:21:44 PM »
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shukriya brokenbyluv ji and aapka bhi killbill ji
aap longo ki dua sath rahi to hum jaroor likhenge!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2012, 04:32:03 AM »
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 Applause  Ji Bohot Khub
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2012, 02:20:55 AM »
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It is very empowering. congratulation.
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