iss ghar ki ladli hoon yeh pehchan mujhe de do,,,,,,,,sunil

by sunildehgawani on October 04, 2011, 06:04:48 AM
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                     ,,,,,,,, save the girls,,,,,,,
 
 
     baha rahi hai mamta jamee par khun ke ansu
               maa ke garbh ma hi betiyon ka katal ab to ho gaya
 

 adharm na karo itna, abhi dharm adhura hai
 bitiya bin dharti ka, singaar adhura hai
  
 
ghar mai mh-mamta ki pahichan wahi to hai
dukh dar udaasi mai mushkaan wahi to hai
            iske bin jeene ka ahsaas adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

daulat na sahi lakin, kuchh piyar isse de do
sansaar mai aane ka, adhikar isse de do
            iske bin rishton ka sansaar adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 
jis ghar mai nahi beti woh ghar duar nahi hoga
bitiya bin poora bhi, pariwaar nahi hoga
            iske jeevan ka uddhar adhura hai
 
    
  
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2011, 01:47:18 PM »
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Waah Sunil ji,Aaj ke eik aham mas'alay per bahut khoobsurat aur dard bhare andaaz mein aapne qalam uthhaya hai.Mubarakbaad nahin doonga balki shukriya adaa karoonga.HASAN
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2011, 01:50:36 PM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 04, 2011, 06:04:48 AM
                     ,,,,,,,, save the girls,,,,,,,
 
 
     baha rahi hai mamta jamee par khun ke ansu
               maa ke garbh ma hi betiyon ka katal ab to ho gaya
 

 adharm na karo itna, abhi dharm adhura hai
 bitiya bin dharti ka, singaar adhura hai
   
 
ghar mai mh-mamta ki pahichan wahi to hai
dukh dar udaasi mai mushkaan wahi to hai
            iske bin jeene ka ahsaas adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

daulat na sahi lakin, kuchh piyar isse de do
sansaar mai aane ka, adhikar isse de do
            iske bin rishton ka sansaar adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 
jis ghar mai nahi beti woh ghar duar nahi hoga
bitiya bin poora bhi, pariwaar nahi hoga
            iske jeevan ka uddhar adhura hai
 
   
 


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Khaas Topic par aapne Likha Hai..Acha Laga yeh Padhkar..

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Yuhi Likhte Rahiye..Iss Topic Par maine Bhi Kuch Likha Hai..

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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2011, 05:43:35 PM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 04, 2011, 06:04:48 AM
                     ,,,,,,,, save the girls,,,,,,,
 
 
     baha rahi hai mamta jamee par khun ke ansu
               maa ke garbh ma hi betiyon ka katal ab to ho gaya
 

 adharm na karo itna, abhi dharm adhura hai
 bitiya bin dharti ka, singaar adhura hai
   
 
ghar mai mh-mamta ki pahichan wahi to hai
dukh dar udaasi mai mushkaan wahi to hai
            iske bin jeene ka ahsaas adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

daulat na sahi lakin, kuchh piyar isse de do
sansaar mai aane ka, adhikar isse de do
            iske bin rishton ka sansaar adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 
jis ghar mai nahi beti woh ghar duar nahi hoga
bitiya bin poora bhi, pariwaar nahi hoga
            iske jeevan ka uddhar adhura hai
 
   
 
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 04, 2011, 06:04:48 AM
                     ,,,,,,,, save the girls,,,,,,,
 
 
     baha rahi hai mamta jamee par khun ke ansu
               maa ke garbh ma hi betiyon ka katal ab to ho gaya
 

 adharm na karo itna, abhi dharm adhura hai
 bitiya bin dharti ka, singaar adhura hai
   
 
ghar mai mh-mamta ki pahichan wahi to hai
dukh dar udaasi mai mushkaan wahi to hai
            iske bin jeene ka ahsaas adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

daulat na sahi lakin, kuchh piyar isse de do
sansaar mai aane ka, adhikar isse de do
            iske bin rishton ka sansaar adhura hai
bitiya bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 
jis ghar mai nahi beti woh ghar duar nahi hoga
bitiya bin poora bhi, pariwaar nahi hoga
            iske jeevan ka uddhar adhura hai
 
   
 
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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2011, 06:16:50 AM »
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siddiqui sahab shikriya ,,,,,hamare lafzon ko sarahne ke liye ....ismain humne kuchh mistakes ki hain ,,,,,,moh-mamta,iske bin jeevan ka , pls put that words ,,,in the field of ,,,mh mamta and ,,iske jeevan ka,,,,khuda hafiz
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Waah Sunil ji,Aaj ke eik aham mas'alay per bahut khoobsurat aur dard bhare andaaz mein aapne qalam uthhaya hai.Mubarakbaad nahin doonga balki shukriya adaa karoonga.HASAN
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thnks manoj ,,,,,ji ,,
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2011, 06:21:43 AM »
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khuwaish ji ,,,bahut bahut shukriya ,,,aapne in lafzon ko juwan bakhsihs ki ....kuchh mistaks hain ,,,pls ignore them ,,,moh mamta ,,,,and iske bin jeewan ka ,,,read that beside mh mamta n iske jeevan ,,,,,,,,thnks a lot of ..for encourage me khuda hafiz
Quote from: khwaish on October 04, 2011, 01:50:36 PM

Bahut Bahut  Khooob Sunil Ji..

Khaas Topic par aapne Likha Hai..Acha Laga yeh Padhkar..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye..Iss Topic Par maine Bhi Kuch Likha Hai..

Main jeena Chaahti Thi..ke Title se,kabhiw aqt mile to Zaroor Padhiyega
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