jab chorh gaye tum

by saahill on May 19, 2011, 05:44:45 AM
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jindagi ek bhoj si ho gaye jab se chorh  gaye ho tum
tukdon mein bikhar gaya jab se dil torh gaye ho tum ,

aankhon mein  sirf aansoon hi hian ab bache hue
jab se ankhon mein base hue khawab torh gaye ho tum ,

gham ke pehra rehta hai ab to raat din is dil par
judaai se aisa rishta mera jab se jorh gaye ho tum ,

bhartey nahin kabhi bhi  jo miltey hain ishq mein
ek ek yaad mein basakar zakham chorh gaye ho tum ,

jindagi ek bhoj si ho gaye jab se chorh gaye ho tum
tukdon mein bikhar gaya jab se dil torh gaye ho tum .

...........................................saahil

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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2011, 05:56:14 AM »
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nice
jindagi ek bhoj si ho gaye jab se chorh  gaye ho tum
tukdon mein bikhar gaya jab se dil torh gaye ho tum ,

aankhon mein  sirf aansoon hi hian ab bache hue
jab se ankhon mein base hue khawab torh gaye ho tum ,

gham ke pehra rehta hai ab to raat din is dil par
judaai se aisa rishta mera jab se jorh gaye ho tum ,

bhartey nahin kabhi bhi  jo miltey hain ishq mein
ek ek yaad mein basakar zakham chorh gaye ho tum ,

jindagi ek bhoj si ho gaye jab se chorh gaye ho tum
tukdon mein bikhar gaya jab se dil torh gaye ho tum .

...........................................saahil


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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2011, 06:01:23 AM »
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thx manoj ji sath dene ke liye
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2011, 01:42:40 PM »
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gud one sahil
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2011, 04:58:30 PM »
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shukrya nirala ji sath dene ka
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2011, 04:59:02 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2011, 05:27:42 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2011, 05:28:46 PM »
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Saahill Ji,

Nice thoughts..keep on writing...

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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2011, 05:36:43 PM »
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