Jab mujhe tujhse mohabat thi, Kahan tha us wakt ?

by prateekagarwal on June 04, 2013, 02:04:55 PM
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Dard ki dil pe hakumat thi, Kahan tha us waqt ?
Jab mujhe teri zaroorat thi, Kahan tha us waqt ?

Maut ke sukh mein chala aya mujhe dekhne ko,
Zinda rehne ki museebat thi, Kahan tha us waqt ?

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Dil ke darya’on mein ab rait hai sehraon ki,
Jab mujhe tujhse mohabat thi, Kahan tha us wakt ?
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2013, 02:24:35 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2013, 02:27:20 PM »
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nice prateek keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2013, 05:23:27 PM »
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Dard ki dil pe hakumat thi, Kahan tha us waqt ?
Jab mujhe teri zaroorat thi, Kahan tha us waqt ?

Maut ke sukh mein chala aya mujhe dekhne ko,
Zinda rehne ki museebat thi, Kahan tha us waqt ?

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Dil ke darya’on mein ab rait hai sehraon ki,
Jab mujhe tujhse mohabat thi, Kahan tha us wakt ?
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah prateek ji,
Behad khoobsurat sher kahe hain aapne.Really nice.
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niceee...
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2013, 11:53:33 PM »
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v good.. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2013, 02:21:07 PM »
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thanks u all friends
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2013, 11:19:13 PM »
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Nice sharing janaab Usual Smile
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