~Jal Jaate Hai~

by suman59 on June 19, 2012, 03:59:58 PM
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Garmiye hasrat-e-nakaam se jal jaate hain
Hum chiraagon ki tarah shaam se jal jaate hain

Shama jalti hai jis aag mein numayish ke liye
Hum usi aag mein gumnaam se jal jaate hain

Jab bhi aata hai tera naam mere naam ke saath
jaane kyon log mere naam se jal jaate hain
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2012, 04:39:28 PM »
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bahut achhe shruaat suman ji main aapko hardik shubhkaamnaayen deta hoon aur jaisaa kee chalan hai ek rau bhee
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2012, 04:45:09 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suman ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2012, 03:34:14 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 19, 2012, 04:39:28 PM
bahut achhe shruaat suman ji main aapko hardik shubhkaamnaayen deta hoon aur jaisaa kee chalan hai ek rau bhee

kya hai rau bhi??? thanks for appreciating dr jee
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 07:54:16 PM »
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khub
tere naam ke peeche hai man aur mere aam ke aage
phir jo log na samjhe hame wo log hai aabhage
Quote from: suman59 on June 19, 2012, 03:59:58 PM
Garmiye hasrat-e-nakaam se jal jaate hain
Hum chiraagon ki tarah shaam se jal jaate hain

Shama jalti hai jis aag mein numayish ke liye
Hum usi aag mein gumnaam se jal jaate hain

Jab bhi aata hai tera naam mere naam ke saath
jaane kyon log mere naam se jal jaate hain
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2012, 10:07:36 PM »
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