***Jiwan Ki Dor***

by AVTAR RAYAT on March 23, 2010, 06:00:14 AM
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Zindagi Ki Saanse Baandhi Hein,
Tumhare Jiwan Ki Dor Se,
Agar Aapke Na Ho Sake...
To Honge Na Kisi Aur Ke...

Jab Tak Saans Chalegi
Tumko Paane Ki Khwahish Rahegi
Warna Chale Jaayeinge
Dunia Se Bagair Kisi Shor Ke.

Kar Lainge Khatm Apne-Aap Ko
Ye Saare Bandhan Tod Ke
Agar Sapne Mein Bhi Dekha Tume,
Aap Huye Hein Kisi Aur Ke..!!
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Wah wah kya baat hai Avtar ji,bahut badiyaa aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.keep it up.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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Good one Avtar ji
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Bahut-Bahut Shukria Aap Sab ka,,,Madhu Ji,,,,
Rajesh Ji,,,,Klaskar Ji,,,Khamosh Awaaz,,,&,,,Suresh Sagwan Ji,,,,
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