kal raat teri yaad ne chen se sone naa diyaa:Share: Poetry of Pain

hameeda

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assalam o alekum

kal raat teri yaad ne, chen se sone na diyaa
har pal sataya aapne, teari baat ne sone na diyaa

karwate lete rahe ham yaad tujhko jab kiaa
na ayaa tu na teri yaad gayi, yaad ne sone na diya

ham tadhapte hi rahe tanhaan or sathi wo chand tha
chand se bate kari teri, us mei tha chehraa tearaa

ro rahe the ham, or shabnam bhi sathi baan gaai
khil ti kalioon mei hame chehra dikhaa subhaa aap kaa

raat roi saath mere chand bhi chup chaap thaa
badal ne yus ko rulaya, aasmaan bhi ro diyaa

ajaa ajaa ab to ajaa, jaan ( bibbo ) ki jaa rahi
bad me phir ye na kehna ( bibbo ) tu ne rulaa diaa

written by H. bibbo ameer
apna khayaal rakhna
allah hafiz


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hameeda

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Re: kal raat teri yaad ne chen se sone naa diyaa

«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2011, 06:57:54 PM »


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nirala

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Re: kal raat teri yaad ne chen se sone naa diyaa

«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2011, 07:07:21 PM »

behad masoom mohabat ka behtareen ehsaas...
bahot khubsurat post hameeda ji.
m a big fan of ur lovely poetries.
aap apna khyal rakhiyega humari khusi ke liye ji.
god bless u sis.


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Anshumali

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Re: kal raat teri yaad ne chen se sone naa diyaa

«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2011, 07:18:18 PM »

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Quote from: hameeda on March 27, 2011, 06:57:33 PM

Very Impressive Creation ... Very Touching ... hameeda ji !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !


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hameeda

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Re: kal raat teri yaad ne chen se sone naa diyaa

«Reply #4 on: March 27, 2011, 07:29:45 PM »

HI

BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA JI
OK JI AAP BHI APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYEGA
BIBBO SHAYAR


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: kal raat teri yaad ne chen se sone naa diyaa

«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2011, 08:42:06 PM »

Sabse pehle to aapko yeh decide karna hai Hameeda jee ke jisse aap is kalam me mukhatib hai use aap "TU" keh rahi hai ya "AAP" keh rahi hai.........aap thodi mehnat aur kare aur apni shayri ko thoda sa seriously le........aapke khayaal bohat khoobsurat hai bas technically aap totally galat hai.


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Re: kal raat teri yaad ne chen se sone naa diyaa

«Reply #6 on: March 27, 2011, 11:31:21 PM »

very emotionals lines hamida ji


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