~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

by thinkhattk on January 08, 2010, 10:56:02 AM
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WO DETA HE DARD BAS HAMI KO,
KYA SAMJEGA WO IN AANKHO KI NAMMI,
LAKHO DIWANE HO JIS KE,
WO KYA MEHSUS KAREGA EK HAMARI KAMMI KO.... sad11

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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2010, 10:57:35 AM »
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bahut khoob ji kya baat hai


har insaan ki alag ahmiyat hoti hai,koi kisi ki kami ko poora nahi ker sakta hai
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2010, 11:05:46 AM »
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sukriya badal ji..

or bilku sahi kaha aap ne....
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arac
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2010, 11:20:52 AM »
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WAH........

JISKE KHUDKE PAER NA HO ZAMMI PAR
USKI KYA NAZAR PADEGI HAMI PAR
KHUD AASMAN KI KHAWISH RAKHTA HAI
AUR HAMARI KAMMI MEHSUS KARTA HAI....
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2010, 11:30:20 AM »
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Wah Dev. ji bahut achhi lines likhi hain. Nice creation. Do mash-hoor sher pesh hain:

Shor barpa hai khana-e-dil mein
Ek deewar si giri hai abhi
Bhari duniya mein jee nahi lagta
Jane kis cheez ki kami hai abhi
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2010, 12:17:18 PM »
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Bahut accha Likha Hai Devangi.. aapki Yeh 4 line mujhe bahut acchi lagi.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2010, 03:13:32 PM »
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i think main bata nahi sakta k mujhe yeh shayri kitni Achhi lagi.dev nice
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2010, 04:27:28 PM »
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nice sharing dev ji....
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2010, 06:28:26 PM »
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Nice lines Deevangi Ji
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2010, 07:26:16 AM »
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aap sabhi ka bahot bahot sukriya.......

Quote from: arac on January 08, 2010, 11:20:52 AM
WAH........

JISKE KHUDKE PAER NA HO ZAMMI PAR
USKI KYA NAZAR PADEGI HAMI PAR
KHUD AASMAN KI KHAWISH RAKHTA HAI
AUR HAMARI KAMMI MEHSUS KARTA HAI....

Quote from: riyaz106 on January 08, 2010, 11:30:20 AM
Wah Dev. ji bahut achhi lines likhi hain. Nice creation. Do mash-hoor sher pesh hain:

Shor barpa hai khana-e-dil mein
Ek deewar si giri hai abhi
Bhari duniya mein jee nahi lagta
Jane kis cheez ki kami hai abhi

bahot hi aachha reply diya he....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2010, 11:13:22 AM »
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Good lines Devangi-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jo jaisa jiska naseeb hota hai usse wahi milta hai
Lakho Diwane jis ke usse sacha saathi kab milta hai



Quote from: thinkhattk on January 08, 2010, 10:56:02 AM
WO DETA HE DARD BAS HAMI KO,
KYA SAMJEGA WO IN AANKHO KI NAMMI,
LAKHO DIWANE HO JIS KE,
WO KYA MEHSUS KAREGA EK HAMARI KAMMI KO.... sad11
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2010, 12:30:00 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!

Thnx!
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2010, 12:33:13 PM »
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good sharing
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