Kuch log sitam karne ko taiyaar baithe hain.

by download4me on October 21, 2009, 03:35:32 PM
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kuch log sitam karne ko taiyaar baithe hain
kuch log magar hum pe dil haar baithe hain
is kasmkas main humse pahchaane nahi jaate
kahan dusman hain aur kaha dost yaar baithe hain
isq ko aag ka dariya hi samjh lijiye huzoor
koi is paar baitha to hum us paar baithe hain
kuon kahta hai ki is sahar main saare hain bewafa
humare saamne do char wafadaar baithe hain
kal tak jinki hasrat thi hume badnaam karne ki
aaj wahi log apne kiye par sarminda baithe hain
duniya se rooth jaane ki khowaish hai humari
kya karen is khowaish par pharedaar baithe hain
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2009, 03:46:09 PM »
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Nice Sharing !

Moved to Appropriate Section.
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minhaj.saif
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2009, 08:52:36 PM »
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nice one but there is an error in "aaj wohi log apne kiye pe sharminda baithe hain" as u were following yaar,tayyar ,haar as radeeph' but in this line u used sharminda that is not suitable word .so plz make it correct.hope u don't mind.
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2009, 03:13:00 PM »
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Nice Sharing
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