kuchh bhi sahi lakin maa-baap hain tere

by sunildehgawani on October 06, 2011, 09:41:20 AM
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                [[[ never ignore them coz,they are visiable god ]]]
 
  
                        -[ tu bhagwaan ka diya hua ek inaam hai inka
                        -[ inki duniya tujhi mai hai tuhi arman hai inka
                        -[ tera hi chehra hai maa-baap ki lachar ankhon mai
                        -[ na bujhana roshni ab rasta anjaan hai inka

 
 
 
   maa-baap se prem karo bhagwan inhi main hai
   apne  har sapne ka sansaar inhi main hai
              
        dhundha hai jise mandir,mashjid,gurudwaron main
        gurudev yahi to hain raam-rahmaan inhi main hai
   tere har ............
  
        kuraan  ramaayan ho, bible ho ya gurbaani
        har dharm granth ka bhi gurgan inhi main hai
   tere har .............
      
        adhar hai jeevan ka dono ki duaon main
        tere sab armano ka bhandar inhi main hai
   tere har .............
  
        dukh-dard, andhera ho bewasi ho ya lachari
        inse hi preet laga muskaan inhi main hai  
   tere har .............
  
        nit sewa kar inki kadmon mai sheesh jhuka
        tere man mandir ka bhagwan inhi main hai
        
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2011, 10:15:34 AM »
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Sunilji,bahut khoobsurat,nek jazbaat se bhari nazm pesh ki hai.Khuda aap ko  khush rakhhe.
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2011, 10:20:52 AM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 06, 2011, 09:41:20 AM
                [[[ never ignore them coz,they are invisiable god ]]]
 
 
                        -[ tu bhagwaan ka diya hua ek inaam hai inka
                        -[ inki duniya tujhi mai hai tuhi arman hai inka
                        -[ tera hi chehra hai maa-baap ki lachar ankhon mai
                        -[ na bujhana roshni ab rasta anjaan hai inka

 
 
 
   maa-baap se prem karo bhagwan inhi main hai
   apne  har sapne ka sansaar inhi main hai
               
        dhundha hai jise mandir,mashjid,gurudwaron main
        gurudev yahi to hain raam-rahmaan inhi main hai
   tere har ............
 
        kuraan  ramaayan ho, bible ho ya gurbaani
        har dharm granth ka bhi gurgan inhi main hai
   tere har .............
     
        adhar hai jeevan ka dono ki duaon main
        tere sab armano ka bhandar inhi main hai
   tere har .............
 
        dukh-dard, andhera ho bewasi ho ya lachari
        inse hi preet laga muskaan inhi main hai 
   tere har .............
 
        nit sewa kar inki kadmon mai sheesh jhuka
        tere man mandir ka bhagwan inhi main hai
       


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khooob Sunil ji...Aaj ke waqt Ki Pukaar Hai yeh Kavita...

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor..kaash Har insaan Isse Samjhe..

Bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2011, 02:29:20 PM »
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Sunil ji,
Bilkul sach kaha hai.
Bahut umda khayalat pesh kiye hain apne.Bahut khoob! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2011, 02:34:03 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat nazm likhai hai aapne.....sabse bda sach yahi hai hamari zindagi  ka..koi saath de ya na de lekin hamare mate-pita hamesha hamaare saath rehte hai...har kadam par hamara saath dete hai...bahut khoob likha aapne....daad kabul kariye......... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.............
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2011, 02:55:35 PM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 06, 2011, 09:41:20 AM
               [[[ never ignore them coz,they are invisiable god ]]]
 
  
                        -[ tu bhagwaan ka diya hua ek inaam hai inka
                        -[ inki duniya tujhi mai hai tuhi arman hai inka
                        -[ tera hi chehra hai maa-baap ki lachar ankhon mai
                        -[ na bujhana roshni ab rasta anjaan hai inka

 
 
 
   maa-baap se prem karo bhagwan inhi main hai
   apne  har sapne ka sansaar inhi main hai
              
        dhundha hai jise mandir,mashjid,gurudwaron main
        gurudev yahi to hain raam-rahmaan inhi main hai
   tere har ............
  
        kuraan  ramaayan ho, bible ho ya gurbaani
        har dharm granth ka bhi gurgan inhi main hai
   tere har .............
      
        adhar hai jeevan ka dono ki duaon main
        tere sab armano ka bhandar inhi main hai
   tere har .............
  
        dukh-dard, andhera ho bewasi ho ya lachari
        inse hi preet laga muskaan inhi main hai  
   tere har .............
  
        nit sewa kar inki kadmon mai sheesh jhuka
        tere man mandir ka bhagwan inhi main hai
        
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2011, 09:32:06 AM »
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siddiqui sahab ,,,aaapka sath bana rahe to kuch bhi asambhab nahi ,,,,yeh ganeemat hai ki aaap jaise parsa ,,pakiza ,,,sakhs ka sath hamain naseeb hua ,,,,,aapki sarahna ke liye ,,,,baar baar shukriya ,,khuda hafiz
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 06, 2011, 10:15:34 AM
Sunilji,bahut khoobsurat,nek jazbaat se bhari nazm pesh ki hai.Khuda aap ko  khush rakhhe.
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2011, 09:35:23 AM »
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thnks khwais ji ,,,apke hauslon ne hi to hamare raston ko ujale bakshe hain ,,,,jo wrds apke signature section main hai ....really bahut hi sanzeeda hain,,,,khuda hafizzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Quote from: khwaish on October 06, 2011, 10:20:52 AM
Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khooob Sunil ji...Aaj ke waqt Ki Pukaar Hai yeh Kavita...

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor..kaash Har insaan Isse Samjhe..

Bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2011, 09:38:44 AM »
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shukriya usha rajesh ji .....hausla afjai ke liye tahe dil shukriya kabul kijiye ,,,,apke words bhi behad khub hain ,,,khuda hafiz
Quote from: usha rajesh on October 06, 2011, 02:29:20 PM


Sunil ji,
Bilkul sach kaha hai.
Bahut umda khayalat pesh kiye hain apne.Bahut khoob! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2011, 09:43:06 AM »
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shukriya nikhar ji ,chahe koi apna ho ya na ho ...lakin woh kabhi paraye nahi hote ,,,,,,apne bilkul sahi kaha ,,,woh ek rishta jo ta umra nahi tutta ,,,woh ek aisa sath hai jo kabhi nahi chutta,,,,aur woh ek aisa karz hai zo hamse marte dum tak nahi chukta ,,,,,khuda hafizzzzzzzzzzzzz
Quote from: Nikhaar on October 06, 2011, 02:34:03 PM
Bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat nazm likhai hai aapne.....sabse bda sach yahi hai hamari zindagi  ka..koi saath de ya na de lekin hamare mate-pita hamesha hamaare saath rehte hai...har kadam par hamara saath dete hai...bahut khoob likha aapne....daad kabul kariye......... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.............
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«Reply #10 on: October 07, 2011, 10:02:28 AM »
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thnks
Quote from: MANOJ6568 on October 06, 2011, 02:55:35 PM
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