***Lauta Do Mera Pyar***

by AVTAR RAYAT on May 26, 2010, 06:16:37 AM
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Tumhara Intzaar Karte-Karte...
Humari Zindagi Guzar Gayi,
Be-karar The Sada Tere Liye...
Zindagi Be-karaari Mein Guzar Gayi,

Tujhse Door Hone Ke Baad...
Judayi Ki Aag Mein Jal Rahe Hein,
Tera Deedar Paane Ko...
Ghut-Ghut Ke Mar Rahe Hein,

Aaj Aayi Hein Dukh Le Ke,
Phir Se Puraani Yaadein Teri,
Jab Khuda Se Tujhe Maangte The..
Aur Duya'on Me Karte The Fariyadein Teri,

Ab To Aansoo Bhi Chhalak-Chhalak Ke...
Aankho Se Baras Rahe Hein,
Moti Palko'n Ke, Pirone Ko...
Tere Intzaar Ko Tars Rahe Hein,

Aaa Jaayo Jaan..Tum Aa Jaayo...
Mere Dil Ko Qaraar De Jaayo,
Jo Bhool Chuke The Pyar Mera..
Wo Aakar Mujhe Lauta Jaayo...!!!

Wo Aakar Mujhe Lauta jaayo...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2010, 02:54:52 PM »
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Dard aur Mohabbat se bhari yeh peshkash achchi lagi.........
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2010, 11:03:36 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Avtar ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2010, 05:06:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob Avtar ji ,fantastic poem,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko bayaan kiya.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2010, 05:38:32 AM »
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Bahut umda sharing hai Avtar Ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2010, 08:58:53 PM »
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Applause Applause
Applause Applause
 bahut hi acchi panktiyaan :D
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2010, 03:53:05 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 26, 2010, 02:54:52 PM
Dard aur Mohabbat se bhari yeh peshkash achchi lagi.........

Shukria Sajid Ji,,,,
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2010, 03:54:22 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 26, 2010, 11:03:36 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Avtar ji... bahut khoob...!!!

Shukriya Klaskar Ji,,,,
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2010, 03:57:05 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 27, 2010, 05:06:28 AM
Bahut khoob Avtar ji ,fantastic poem,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko bayaan kiya.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukria Madhu Ji...Thanx....
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2010, 03:58:16 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 27, 2010, 05:38:32 AM
Bahut umda sharing hai Avtar Ji
Bahut-Bahur Shukria Rajesh Ji...
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2010, 04:00:12 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on May 27, 2010, 08:58:53 PM
Applause Applause
Applause Applause
 bahut hi acchi panktiyaan :D
Shukria Thegrimreaper Ji,,,,
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2010, 04:37:13 AM »
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good lines................ Applause Applause Applause tearyeyed
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