Lo Apna JaHan DunYa WaLo

by Farhan Sohail on February 20, 2013, 09:54:25 PM
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Lo apna jahan dunya walo,hum is dunya ko chor chalay
Jo rishtey natay joray thay wo rishtey natay tor chalay


kuch sukh ke sapne dekh chalay,kuch dukh k sadmay jheel chalay,
taqdeer ki andhi gardish ne jo khel khailay khail chalay.


Har cheez tumhari lotadi hum lekey na kuch saath chalay
phir dosh na dena ,Ae logoo hum dekh lo khali hath chalay,


Ye rah akelay kat-ti hai,yahan sath na koi yar chalay
Os paar na jane kia payen, Is par tu sab har kch chalay
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2013, 12:44:32 AM »
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wah
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2013, 01:18:15 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2013, 02:25:03 AM »
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Wah..wah. Farhan bhai,
Bahut khub ghazal kahi hai aapne.
Last misra- us paar na jane kya payeen,Is paar to sub kuch haar chaley. bahut achha hai. Dili mubarakbad.Ek rao to banta hai.
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2013, 04:28:37 AM »
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bht bdhiya janaab
aapki rachna wakai lajawaab h

aate rahie
likhte rahie
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2013, 04:40:50 AM »
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beautiful . ... and  welcome , newbie, to  Yoindia Shayariadab
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2013, 05:20:05 AM »
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Buht Buht Shukriya aap ki muhabbat ka, yehi chaht rahi tu kon jaye ga iss mefil ko chor k jab tak hai JAAN,
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2013, 05:40:13 AM »
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kya baat hai. bahut khoob ji. dheron daad.
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2013, 05:58:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah bahut khoob likha hai aapne Farhan ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2013, 07:21:42 AM »
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Quote from: Farhan Sohail on February 20, 2013, 09:54:25 PM
Lo apna jahan dunya walo,hum is dunya ko chor chalay
Jo rishtey natay joray thay wo rishtey natay tor chalay


kuch sukh ke sapne dekh chalay,kuch dukh k sadmay jheel chalay,
taqdeer ki andhi gardish ne jo khel khailay khail chalay.


Har cheez tumhari lotadi hum lekey na kuch saath chalay
phir dosh na dena ,Ae logoo hum dekh lo khali hath chalay,


Ye rah akelay kat-ti hai,yahan sath na koi yar chalay
Os paar na jane kia payen, Is par tu sab har kch chalay

Nice ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2013, 07:45:26 AM »
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 Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley
nice...
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