mere chale jaane ke baad

by poonamA on December 23, 2011, 02:53:11 AM
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tune thukraya hai mujhe itna kareeb aane ke baad
tadpega sunne ko meri awaj mere chale jaane ke baad
ab so raha hai chain se mujhe jaga ke ratto me
siskega tu bhi har raat mere chale jaane ke baad
ab mere shahar  aane se tujhe nafrat hai
aayega meri qabra par mere chale jane ke baad
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2011, 03:15:03 AM »
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kareeb to tum aa na sake mujhe jindagi se dhoor kar diya .
 
Raaton ki neend ko taraste the tumne hameshan ke liye aankhon ko band kar diya *

tere dil ke shehar mein socha tha bas jaun .
Tumne is dunya se hi mera naata torh diya
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2011, 03:36:15 AM »
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Quote from: poonamA on December 23, 2011, 02:53:11 AM
tune thukraya hai mujhe itna kareeb aane ke baad
tadpega sunne ko meri awaj mere chale jaane ke baad
ab so raha hai chain se mujhe jaga ke ratto me
siskega tu bhi har raat mere chale jaane ke baad
ab mere shahar  aane se tujhe nafrat hai
aayega meri qabra par mere chale jane ke baad
baht baht khoob Beta

baht achi post--
daad daad

khus raho
muskurate raho

god bless u
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2011, 03:54:18 AM »
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thank u sarfira ji
Quote from: sarfira on December 23, 2011, 03:36:15 AM
baht baht khoob Beta

baht achi post--
daad daad

khus raho
muskurate raho

god bless u
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2011, 04:07:46 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2011, 04:43:48 AM »
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thanx
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2011, 01:05:51 PM »
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very nice poetry

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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2011, 03:35:12 AM »
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thank u jasleenji
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very nice poetry

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