***Pyar Ki Tadaf***:Share: Poetry of Pain

AVTAR RAYAT

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Bahut Baar Kahna Chaha Tha Tumse,
Ki Mujhe Tumse Pyar Hai,
Par Tum Nahi Samjhe...,

Apni Dosti Aur Pyar Ke Beech Ki Patli Lakeer
Main Paar Nahi Kar Paya,

Un Nazdikiyo Ka Kaaran Batana Chahta Tha Tume,
Par Tum Nahi Samjhe...,

Sath Chahta Tha Tumhara Umar Bhar Ke Liye,
Tumhare Liye Apna Pyar Jatana Chahta Tha,
Par Tum Nahi Samjhe...,

Kabhi Jhaank Kar Meri Aankhon Mein Dekha Hota
Saari Kahaani Tum Pad Lete,

Be Inteha Pyar Jhalkta Tha In Mein Tumhare Liye,
Par Tum Nahi Samjhe...,

Apne Kaam Apne Sapno Mein Khoya Raha Tha Main,
Tume Apne Kaamo Se Na Kabhi Fursat Mili,

Mere Sapno, Meri Aarzoo Mein Sirf Tumhari Hi Soch Thi,
Par Tum Nahi Samjhe...,

Apne Armaano...Apne Sapno Ko Dafna Ke, Main Rota Raha,
Mere Aansu'on Ko Baithe Tum Dekhte Rahe,

Un Aansu'on Ka Kaaran...Mere Pyar Ki Tadaf...Meri Adhuri
Kahani...
Tum Nahi Samjhe...!!


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madhuwesh

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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2010, 06:15:53 AM »

Wah wah Avtar ji,bahut achi tarah se likha aapne,great work,bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.excellent Hats off to you!


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AVTAR RAYAT

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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2010, 06:49:26 AM »

Aapka Bahut-Bahut Shukria MADHU JI,,,,,,


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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2010, 10:45:22 AM »

bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Avtar ji. Bahut sundarta se apni bebasi ka varnan kiya hai. Bahut pyaari kavita hai ye... Clapping Smiley

"Apni dosti aur pyar ke bich ki patli lakeer,
Main paar nahi kar paaya ..."

Sach me yahi hota hai dost. Hum kai baar is tarah bandhano me bandh jaate hain ki apne dil ki baat zubaan tak nahi laa paate. Dar rehta hai humein dosti tutne ka . Aise hi kabhi meri haalat thi....

Aur sochta tha...

"Dost hai meri humdum hai wo, mujhse nahi anjani hai,
Kai saalon se saath hain hum do, bas itni si meri kahani hai,
Dosh na dena usko kabhi tum wo to dil ki rani hai,
Mere dil ko padh na saki wo ye uski nadani hai...

Hum to aashiq kayar hain jo labo se kuch na keh paaye,
Shayad aakhri saans tak ye dil me apne reh jaaye,
Uthegi ek din doli uski mere nazar ke saamne hi,
Ho sakta hai kaanch ka ye dil tab tukdo me bikhar ke reh jaye...."

Bahut achcha likha hai aapne.. likhte rahiye... aur hume aap ki kavitaayen padh k anand lene dijiye...!!!


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AVTAR RAYAT

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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2010, 02:09:44 PM »

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukria..Klaskar Ji..
Aapne Reply Mein Bahut Hi La-Jawab Tarike
Se Apne Dil Ka Dard Veya'n Kiya Hai...Bahut
Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne...


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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2010, 02:34:06 PM »

Bahut bahut shukriyaa Avtar ji... achcha lage janke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi... bahut bahut shukriya ...!!!

Quote from: AVTAR RAYAT on March 24, 2010, 02:09:44 PM

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukria..Klaskar Ji..
Aapne Reply Mein Bahut Hi La-Jawab Tarike
Se Apne Dil Ka Dard Veya'n Kiya Hai...Bahut
Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne...


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2010, 08:56:58 AM »

Bahut khoob Avtar Ji


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Kanta

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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2010, 09:48:41 AM »

Acha likhe ho avtar


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AVTAR RAYAT

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Re: ***Pyar Ki Tadaf***

«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2010, 08:00:19 AM »

Aapka Shukria...Harish Ji,,,Kanta Ji,,,,


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