**Rooh ya sirf Jism **:Share: Poetry of Pain

kritika sharma

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Ae Rab kyon har baar meri mahoobat aduri rah jaati hai,
Har aadami ki niyat kyon pyar ko chod kar mere jism tak pahunch jaati hai,
Kyon har najar jisse mene pyar chaha usne hi mera jism nocha hai ,
kya pyaar mangna itna badha gunaah hai jo har shaqs ne mujhe pyar ke naam pe loota hai !
Meri Rooh ab bhi pyaasi hai kisi ke pyar ke liye,
par ab shayd me us layak nahi .....kisi ke pyar ke layak nahi !!

Log auarat ko fakat jism samjh lete hai ,
Rooh bhi hoti hai unme wo kaha sonchte hai! love9


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cara

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Re: **jism ya rooh **

«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2010, 06:21:57 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI KRITIKA SHARMA JI.....

"JISM YA ROOH" NAHIN JISM AUR ROOH
DONO HI HAI IK AURAT KI KHUSBOO
KISI NE MERE ROOH MEIN NAHI JAANKA
JO BHI AAYA SIRF MERE JISM KO TAANKA....


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2010, 07:04:22 AM »

Quote from: kritika sharma on November 02, 2010, 06:10:18 AM

Ae Rab kyon har baar kyon meri mahoobat aduri rah jaati hai,
Har aadami ki niyat kyon pyar ko chod kar mere jism tak pahunch jaati hai,
Kyon har najar jisse mene pyar chaha usne hi mera jism nocha hai ,
kya pyaar mangna itna badha gunaah hai jo har shaqs ne mujhe pyar ke naam pe loota hai !
Meri Rooh ab bhi pyaasi hai kisi ke pyar ke liye,
par ab shayd me us layak nahi .....kisi ke pyar ke layak nahi !!

Log auarat ko fakat jism samjh lete hai ,
Rooh bhi hoti hai unme wo kaha sonchte hai! love9

kya bat he kritika ji ..bahut gehrii par sachchi bat uthai he apne..

me usse pyar karta hun bhale nahi janta kitni khubsurat he woh
meri ankhon ne bas uska dil dekha bhale nahi janta kisiki dhadkan he woh~


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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2010, 04:23:35 PM »

wahhhhhhhhh kritika bht achcha likha hai tumne aur sahi maane me ek tamacha hai ye unn ladkon k chehre pe jo iss tarah ki soch k sath milte hain......

thnx for sharing such a beautiful composition and reality.......


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KOYAL46

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2010, 05:49:28 PM »

Kritika-di atayant bhav-purn......aacrosshh se bhari hui pesh-kash hai aapki.......
samaaj ke ess gheeghone tabke par ek shashakt pratikriya........
Ek aurat ki tadap......bebasi.....ka chitran..... :
clap: Applause

Pyaar ko vaasna samajhne waale ye aaj-kal ke ladke
Aurat ke jism ko khilona samajhne waale ye darinde

Sammaj ke naam pe ye badsurat-behooda kalank ka teeka hain
Aao hum sab ladkiyen milkar khayein kasam ab ye julm na sahenge hum

Aao sakhee ess roohon ki mehfil me swagat hai tera
Yahaan nahi milega tujhe koi bhee tere jism ka lootera

Quote from: kritika sharma on November 02, 2010, 06:10:18 AM


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kritika sharma

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2010, 04:21:56 AM »

Thank u so much ..cara ji ,abhi ji ,koyal ji..kasakji and shihab ji ....... !! thanks for understanding it . !!


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2010, 06:45:07 AM »

Thank you to you kritika ji aapne likhne ki ek or wajah de di..
ab sach hi likhna hai to eisa hi sahi ...


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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2010, 07:11:27 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 02, 2010, 05:49:28 PM

guud 1 gudiya..ab tum josh me aai hui buri ho bht....shaant baalike shanntttt


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2010, 07:36:50 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 02, 2010, 05:49:28 PM

hmm likho par thoda sa shant man se...hehehhe


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KOYAL46

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #9 on: November 03, 2010, 08:41:27 AM »

Sorry yaar Nari ke prati jab bhi annyaay dekhti hu tou khoon khoul uthta hai.......
Fir tou ye kalam shole ugalne lagti hai....kya karu.....mein aysi he hu reeeeeeee

Anu-di ''BURI HO BHT'' KYU KAHA......sab k liye thode likha hai...applies only for those perverted minds.....
Lo ab shaantttttttttttt icon_flower

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 03, 2010, 07:11:27 AM

guud 1 gudiya..ab tum josh me aai hui buri ho bht....shaant baalike shanntttt

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 03, 2010, 07:36:50 AM

hmm likho par thoda sa shant man se...hehehhe


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2010, 08:55:24 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 03, 2010, 08:41:27 AM

uff akhir mujhe likhne par majboor karoge hi...ye mere likhe kuchh dohe he naari shakti par...shayad pasand aaye~

rishi muni jan keh gaye nari sati mahaan
nari mahima na jaan sake swayambhu hari bhagwan~

nari shakti he bramhand ki aloukik soumyaswaroop
janani wahi janki wahi hai durga chandi ke roop~

jab man me bhay ka vaas ho soojhe na raah koiii
bhaje "Abhi" bas he mata path darshaoo mohii~


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KOYAL46

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2010, 09:13:35 AM »

Tatha Astu Bachche......
essi tarah nari-gun gaate raho kalyaan hoga......
Jald he bhagya me tere vivah-yog banega..Baalak
Sava-man ka prashaad Devi k charno me arpan kar gareebo mai baant dena....jeete raho !!!!


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kritika sharma

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #12 on: November 03, 2010, 01:16:06 PM »

haan likhiye sach ..abhi ji.best of luck .
and koyal ji aap shaant or gusse dono me acha likhti hai isliye aese hi likhte rahiye ..!!


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KOYAL46

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #13 on: November 03, 2010, 01:20:21 PM »

aaMEEN Sakhee....


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dead heart

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Re: **Rooh ya sirf Jism **

«Reply #14 on: November 03, 2010, 08:55:50 PM »

Quote from: kritika sharma on November 02, 2010, 06:10:18 AM

Bahaut achi sharing hai yeh..
bas ek baat kehna chahta hoon..ek personal opinion hai..
jo jism ko dekhe woh mohobat kay layak nahin hai aur jo jism dikhaye, woh bhi layak nahin hai..
likhne wali ne bahaut dard bhara hai mager ek baat galat likh gayi kay 'main mohobat kay layak nahin..'..meri nazar main zaroor mohobat kay layak ho mager samne wala layak nahin hai..
Khush rahiye!


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