Saans ruk gayi

by abhi bhi zinda hun on July 25, 2010, 06:46:08 AM
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Subah bhi aayi, Raat bhi gayi !!
Chhaon jab maangi, Dhoop mil gayi !!

Chah thi chhoti, Baat par kai !!
Raah jab mili, Manzil chhoot gayi !!

Dhun bhi nayi, Geet bhi kai !!
Nazm jab meri, Mehfil ooth gayi !!

Aah thi meri, Jazbat bhi wahi !!
Aawaz jab bani, Saans ruk gayi !!
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2010, 06:54:20 AM »
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wahhhh.......kya baat kahi hai aapne ....dil ko chhu gaye aapke alfaaz.....
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2010, 07:32:03 AM »
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good one ....
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2010, 10:00:33 AM »
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Quote from: abhi bhi zinda hun on July 25, 2010, 06:46:08 AM
Subah bhi aayi, Raat bhi gayi !!
Chhaon jab maangi, Dhoop mil gayi !!

Chah thi chhoti, Baat par kai !!
Raah jab mili, Manzil chhoot gayi !!

Dhun bhi nayi, Geet bhi kai !!
Nazm jab meri, Mehfil ooth gayi !!

Aah thi meri, Jazbat bhi wahi !!
Aawaz jab bani, Saans ruk gayi !!

Aapki tehreer ke eshaas khoob lage mujhe...dil se daad !
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2010, 02:55:26 PM »
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Aap sabhi ko bahut bahut  dhanyavad.
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