Tere jaaane ke baad:Share: Poetry of Pain

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tere jaane ke baad kuch is tarah ka aalam hai,
ashq nayano se rukne ka naam hi nahi lete hain,
kabhi tere saath ko yaad karte hain kabhi teri ruswaai ko,
tere bin na jaane kaise har roz ek nai zindagi ji lete hain,
humne to socha tha ki tere sang zindagi poori bitayenge,
ab tere naam se zeher ke do char jaam hum roz pi lete hain...


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mohd wasil

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Re: Tere jaaane ke baad

«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2010, 05:18:07 AM »

gandu, kamine teri kutte saale jab shayri ati nahi tou karte kiyu ho gandu............. icon_scratch

bahan chod.....


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Re: Tere jaaane ke baad

«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2010, 06:41:19 AM »

Bahut khoob Kapil ji.very beautiful creation.


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Re: Tere jaaane ke baad

«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2010, 09:17:09 AM »

Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Madhuwesh ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 24, 2010, 06:41:19 AM

Bahut khoob Kapil ji.very beautiful creation.


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rkswatian

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Re: Tere jaaane ke baad

«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2010, 09:44:50 AM »

Salam Namaste Klaskar
kese mizaaj hain janab ke...
umeed hain teek taak hongey aap...

yaar kamal ka likhtey hain aap
very nice
lagey rahi jee
yaar is comments pe bura mat manna
ye duniya hain
yahan achey loog bhi hain
aur bury bhi
tu asy loogon ke muh nahi lagna chahey jo khud giry howey ho...
samjhey janab
apney poems yahan pe aap bilkul share kar saktey hain
aur dukhi honey ki koi zarorat nahi hain
us ke ley hum aap se muafi mangtey hain


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Re: Tere jaaane ke baad

«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2010, 11:09:24 AM »

Salaam Namaste Rehan ji,

Hum thik hain aur umeed karte hain aap bhi sakushal honge.
Achcha lagaa jaanke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi. Bahut bahut dhanyawaad. Log achche ya bure nahi hotey unki soch achchi ya buri hoti hai.Aur aap maafi maangke humein sharminda kar rahe hain. Hum dukhi nahi hain. Humne to use andekha hi kar diya. In duniya me itna dard hai ki yun chote chhote baaton ka bura nahi maana karte.

Fir se aapka tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya. Chaliye isi bahane se aapse baat karne ka mauka to mila. Aapke roop me ek dost to mila.

Quote from: rkswatian on March 24, 2010, 09:44:50 AM


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Re: Tere jaaane ke baad

«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2010, 11:24:54 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriyaa Kaash ji...bahut bahut shukriya ...!!!

Quote from: @kaash on March 24, 2010, 11:12:23 AM

bahut khoob likha hai Klaskar ji,awesome
RK ji aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai


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