Toote-Foote Shayari

by abhi bhi zinda hun on October 08, 2010, 06:54:05 PM
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Besabab hasraton ka dard-e-fasana kab talak main bhulunga,
Jab ek mukaddar hi apna hua na kaise kahun main jeelunga !!

Uske visaal-e-mustaqbil ke iflaas mein,
Mujhe paimaan-e-shikan ki talaash mein !!
Moula teri mashiyat ki tahariir mil gayi,
Ab to zindagi na jeene ki zanjeer mil gayi !!


Chaha tha jisko tu har pal har lamha,
Kya hua jab ek muddat bhi woh tujhko na mila !!
Paana kya is duniya se jana hain tanha,
Tere liye to woh rab tha us rab se kya gila !!


Kabhi mere mohabbat ki barkat hi barkat thi,
Zikra bhi raha uske ikraar ka !!
Par aaj kyon mout ki raahatein lage jannat si,
Fikra bhi kaha uske inkaar ka !!

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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2010, 06:59:40 PM »
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Aadaab Janab....!

Masah Allah Janab aapke paas to urdu ke lafzoN ka
kafi jamawda hai, aapki tehreer e khayaal behad achche hai...

per muafi chahte hai ... hum aapki tehrees samjh hi nahi paye... Hum kuch urdu ke muamle meiN kam akhal hai... So aap hi wazahat kar dijiye jo aapne urdu ke hard words use kiye hai unki...

Baki likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2010, 07:14:33 PM »
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Dhanyavad Parwaaz sahab. Hume behad khed hain apne upar jo aap samajh nahi paaye.

Niche ek prayas hain aapko urdu ke un kathin shabdo ko samjhane ka. Baki...Khush rahiye..aabad rahiye...likhte rahiye..likhwate rahiye !!


Besabab: Without reason ( Bina kisi wajah)
Visaal: Meeting ( Milan)
Mustaqbil: In Future ( Bhavishya me)
Iflass: Poverty (Garibi)
paimaan(Promise)-e-shikan: One who breaks promise ( Jo waada tode)
Mashiyat: God's will (Khuda ki ichha)
Tahariir: Handwriting (Hath se likha hua)
Muddat: Long time period  (Bahut Lamba Samay)
Raahatein: Comfort (Aaram)
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2010, 12:59:16 AM »
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BAHUT KHUB

Besabab hasraton ka dard-e-fasana kab talak main bhulunga,
Jab ek mukaddar hi apna hua na kaise kahun main jeelunga !!

Uske visaal-e-mustaqbil ke iflaas mein,
Mujhe paimaan-e-shikan ki talaash mein !!
Moula teri mashiyat ki tahariir mil gayi,
Ab to zindagi na jeene ki zanjeer mil gayi !!


Chaha tha jisko tu har pal har lamha,
Kya hua jab ek muddat bhi woh tujhko na mila !!
Paana kya is duniya se jana hain tanha,
Tere liye to woh rab tha us rab se kya gila !!


Kabhi mere mohabbat ki barkat hi barkat thi,
Zikra bhi raha uske ikraar ka !!
Par aaj kyon mout ki raahatein lage jannat si,
Fikra bhi kaha uske inkaar ka !!


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