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Tu aaja

by Angel Sunshine on December 05, 2016, 09:19:46 PM

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Angel Sunshine

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Adhure ye sapne adhuri ye raate
Tere na hone se h adhuri saari baate
Tu nhi to nhi mera din raushan
Sham nhi meri rangeen tere bin
Is shaam ka jalta diya banke aaja
Tu ik wari aaja

Kaise kate meri ye rattiya
Dil kisko sunaye ab battiya
Lu saanse to mehek banke aaja
Is barish boond banke tu aaja
Chain na aaye mere bechain dil ko
Is rooh me hone sharik tu aaja
In aankho k ashko me aaja
Bas ik wari mere samne aaja

Tu aaja

Tu hi tha hamsafar tu hi dua me shamil
Tere na hone se
Adhuri hu mai adhura h ye ishq
Ise karne kaamil tu aaja...

Tu aaja dene mere aasman ko zamin
Lehro ko dene kinara tu aaja

Tu aaja... Ik wari aaja
Tu aaja..


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Re: Tu aaja

«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2016, 01:19:27 AM »

Very nice


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RAKESH DENGDA

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Re: Tu aaja

«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2016, 11:16:19 AM »

Nice...


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surindarn

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Re: Tu aaja

«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2016, 10:00:45 PM »

kyaa baat hai, dheron daad w/Rau. I am wondering, you have used the word ik waari istead of ek baar. Why?
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Re: Tu aaja

«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2016, 04:18:22 PM »

waah waah


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Angel Sunshine

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Re: Tu aaja

«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2016, 05:06:18 PM »

Quote from: surindarn on December 06, 2016, 10:00:45 PM

kyaa baat hai, dheron daad w/Rau. I am wondering, you have used the word ik waari istead of ek baar. Why?
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Coz I didn't get that feel in ek bar which I found in 'ik wari' .. It didn't sound good when I used ek bar..


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