***Tujhse Judaayi Ka Gam***:Share: Poetry of Pain

AVTAR RAYAT

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Aye Dost...
Teri Baatein Teri Yaadein...
Bahut Sataati Hein,
Tanhayio'n Mein Ye Aankhein...
Bhar-Bhar Aati Hein,

Kis Se Kahu'n Main...
Apne Dil Ki Tadpan Ko...
Ye Hawayein Bhi Ab Mera...
Kaha'n Saath Nibhaati Hein,

Ye Baarish Ki Boondein...
Ye Mitti Ki Khushbu,
Tumhare Paas Hone Ka...
Ehsaas Dilaati Hein,

Mujhe Tujhse Judaayi Ka...
Itna Gam Hai Aye Dost..Ke...
Har Jagah Mujhe Bas Tumhari...
Parchayia'n Hi Nazar Aati Hein

Deta Hai Sadaayein...
Shayad Koyi Kahi'n Door Se...
Phoolo'n Ki Khushbu...
Jannat Se Jaise Aati Hein,

Aaj Na Jaane Kyo...
Mehsoos Hota Hai Is Dil Ko,
Jaise Bichhde Dost Ki Baahein...
Humein Apne Paas Bulaati Hein...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT


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Re: ***Tujhse Judaayi Ka Gam***

«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 05:14:17 AM »

bahut pyare se judai ke ehsaas .
bahut khub dost0
khus rahiye
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Re: ***Tujhse Judaayi Ka Gam***

«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2011, 11:55:10 AM »

Aadaab Janab!

Behad khoob ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne..
Sabhi warse achche rahe...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye ..
Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...


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Re: ***Tujhse Judaayi Ka Gam***

«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 04:25:26 PM »

Quote from: AVTAR RAYAT on February 01, 2011, 04:36:20 AM

Khoobsurat ehsaas hai aapki kavita meN ... very nice poetry !

dil se daad ........ !!!!!!!!


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Re: ***Tujhse Judaayi Ka Gam***

«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2011, 04:41:47 PM »

avtaar ji mujhe aapka ye sidhe saral andaaz me likhna bht hi achcha lagta hai..apkis ari poetries dil se niklati hain aur dil ko chhujati hain..bht khubb ji


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: ***Tujhse Judaayi Ka Gam***

«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 01:04:31 PM »

Bahut Khub Avtar JI


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Re: ***Tujhse Judaayi Ka Gam***

«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2011, 08:38:34 AM »

judai ke ahsas ko bahut ache alfajo me piroya hai aapne avtar ji.keep it up. Clapping Smiley


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