***Tumhein Bhulaana Mushkil***

by AVTAR RAYAT on August 18, 2010, 01:36:08 PM
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Aye Jaan....

Kaise Keh Diya Tumne...
Ke Mujhe Bhool Jaayo,
Apne Hoto Par Tum...
Mera Naam Na Laayo..

Magar....Haa...
Main Tumein...
Bhool Sakta Hu,

Agar Dharti Ghoomna Chhod De...
Suraj Bhi Rasta Mod Le,
Baharo'n Mein Phool Na Mehke...
Aasmaan Pe Chaand Na Chamke,

Tumein....
Bhool Sakta Hu...

Pahado'n Mein Jharne Ulte Bahe,
Barf Aag Mein Jalne Lage,
Samundar Mein Paani Na Rahe,
Mom Pighalne Ko Na Kahe....

Par..Jaise Ye Sab Kudrat Ki...
Cheezo Mein Aasaan Nahi,
Waise Hi Apke Bagair...
Mere Jism Mein Jaan Nahi,

Bahut Mushkil Hai Mera...
Tumein Bhool Paana,
Dil Par Likha Hai Jo Naam Tumhara...
Use Mitaana...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2010, 01:52:57 PM »
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bahut khoob Avtar ji...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 04:25:11 PM »
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nice poem...nice wordings....liked it...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut muskil hota hai pehle pyar ko bhula paana
Esse bhi jayada muskil hota he bina uske jee pana


Quote from: AVTAR RAYAT on August 18, 2010, 01:36:08 PM
Aye Jaan....

Kaise Keh Diya Tumne...
Ke Mujhe Bhool Jaayo,
Apne Hoto Par Tum...
Mera Naam Na Laayo..

Magar....Haa...
Main Tumein...
Bhool Sakta Hu,

Agar Dharti Ghoomna Chhod De
Suraj Rasta Mod Le,
Phoolo Ki Mehak Na Rahe,
Chaand Mein Chamak Na Rahe

Tumein....
Bhool Sakta Hu...

Pahado'n Mein Jharne Ulte Bahe,
Barf Aag Mein Jalne Lage,
Samundar Mein Paani Na Rahe,
Mom Pighalne Ko Na Kahe....

Par..Jaise Ye Sab Kudrat Ki...
Cheezo Mein Aasaan Nahi,
Waise Hi Apke Bagair...
Mere Jism Mein Jaan Nahi,

Bahut Mushkil Hai Mera...
Tumein Bhool Paana,
Dil Par Likha Hai Jo Naam Tumhara...
Use Mitaana...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 04:40:53 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Avtar ji.....very nice.....

Nice lines koyal....
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 08:27:43 PM »
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Beatiful Work.......
And very nicely poetryed......

Achcha likha hai janab Daad....

Pathar mere dil ko banaa deN moula
Yaa chin le mujhse uski yaadeN moula
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 09:43:20 PM »
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Bahut Mushkil Hai Mera...
Tumein Bhool Paana,
Dil Par Likha Hai Jo Naam Tumhara...
Use Mitaana...!!!

Bohat Khoob Avtar saheb.......daad kabool kare.
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2010, 04:12:28 AM »
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Klaskar Ji...
Koyal Ji...
Nikhaar Ji...
Parwaaz Ji...
&
Sazid Ji....
Aap Sab Ka Tahe Dil Se
Bahut-Bahut Shukria....
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2010, 09:53:28 AM »
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nice lines yar keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2010, 03:45:01 AM »
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Shukria Muzammil Ji...Thanx....
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 08:26:28 PM »
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Quote from: AVTAR RAYAT on August 18, 2010, 01:36:08 PM
Aye Jaan....

Kaise Keh Diya Tumne...
Ke Mujhe Bhool Jaayo,
Apne Hoto Par Tum...
Mera Naam Na Laayo..

Magar....Haa...
Main Tumein...
Bhool Sakta Hu,

Agar Dharti Ghoomna Chhod De...
Suraj Bhi Rasta Mod Le,
Baharo'n Mein Phool Na Mehke...
Aasmaan Pe Chaand Na Chamke,

Tumein....
Bhool Sakta Hu...

Pahado'n Mein Jharne Ulte Bahe,
Barf Aag Mein Jalne Lage,
Samundar Mein Paani Na Rahe,
Mom Pighalne Ko Na Kahe....

Par..Jaise Ye Sab Kudrat Ki...
Cheezo Mein Aasaan Nahi,
Waise Hi Apke Bagair...
Mere Jism Mein Jaan Nahi,

Bahut Mushkil Hai Mera...
Tumein Bhool Paana,
Dil Par Likha Hai Jo Naam Tumhara...
Use Mitaana...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT
Bahut khoob Avtar Ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2010, 04:06:31 AM »
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Shukria...Rajesh H. JI...Thanx...
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