Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

by prashantsingh on November 03, 2012, 11:18:48 AM

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prashantsingh

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Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaa.n baar baar kyun
khauf ki yeh daastaa.n baar baar kyun
ishk ka anzaam aakhir dard bhara kyun
hansta hai mujh par yeh jahaa.n baar baar kyun
deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi aati
ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun


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aqsh

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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2012, 11:48:24 AM »

bahut khoob


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gaytri gupta

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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2012, 12:30:45 PM »

Nice...


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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2012, 03:13:41 PM »

deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi aati
ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun
Bahut Khoob


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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2012, 04:43:16 PM »

Quote from: prashantsingh on November 03, 2012, 11:18:48 AM


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mkv

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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2012, 07:07:51 PM »

bahut khoob

note: Poetry lounge where you have posted, that is meant for sharing other's creation only. I hope you get my point)


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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2012, 12:53:34 AM »

very nice


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Aarish

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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2012, 01:19:49 AM »

Quote from: prashantsingh on November 03, 2012, 11:18:48 AM

bohut khoob umda peshkash aur is shair ke liye khusoosi daaad qubool kijiye

deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi,

aati ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun


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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2012, 01:53:31 AM »

waah waah


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soudagar

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Re: Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2012, 03:58:25 PM »

bahut khoob jaanb bahut hi khub


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