vakt- ek maut honi hai

by nirbhay bhartiya on March 16, 2013, 03:03:24 PM
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kaise  gale lagau mujhse
tujhe mere priyatum
jb pata h
thodi der baad tu
khud b khud dur ho jayegi
kasur tera bhi naa hoga
kasur mera bhi naa hoga
par samjho
yahi kahani hoti hai
har vakt ki jindgani hoti h
milan tera mujhse
bhi kuch es kadar he hoga
raat ki tanhaiyo me
takia tera bhi geela hoga
aur mera bhi hoga
sachaai yahi h
har vakt ki tarah
es vakt ki
nirbhay maut honi hai
tau batao mere priyatum
kaise gale lagau mujhse
tujhe mere priyatum
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2013, 04:19:21 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2013, 04:45:44 PM »
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Beautiful poem...!!!
Welcome to Yoindia Nirbhay ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2013, 06:21:15 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2013, 09:32:41 PM »
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thanks to all of u

respected sirs,
i am a poet who is trying to stand in our country people heart.
i would be thankful to that 'vakt' whenever i would become a part of   "kavi sammelan".
if my poems touch u that means me 'nachij' is so thankful.
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Beautiful poem...!!!
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thank u hridayji
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2013, 02:37:36 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2013, 03:01:57 AM »
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bahut khoob
bahut khoob
bahut khoob
bahut khoob
thanks sagar ji
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