Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

by the soul shaker on April 07, 2013, 03:25:08 PM

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Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa,,
ktaa ke par ko parinda udaan se bhi gyaa,,
tabaah kar gayi pkke makaan ki khwaahish,,
main apne gaon ke kcche makaan se bhi gyaa,,
paraayi aag mein khud kya mila tujh ko,,
usse bachaa naa skaa apni jaan se bhi gyaa,,
bhulanaa chaaha to bhulaane ki intehaa kar di,,
wo shakhs ab mere veham-o-gumaan se bhi gyaa,,
kisi ke hath ka niklaa hua wo teer hoon main,,
hadaf ko chhu na skaa aur kamaan se bhi gyaa..

N.M.


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2013, 03:57:18 PM »

nice


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Farhan Sohail

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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2013, 04:57:34 PM »

Quote from: the soul shaker on April 07, 2013, 03:25:08 PM

very well, buht achay khayalat ko lafzon main dhalah hai, keep it up


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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2013, 06:34:43 PM »

waah waah excellent


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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2013, 08:35:31 PM »

Quote from: the soul shaker on April 07, 2013, 03:25:08 PM

bahut khoob sharing..............!


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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2013, 07:42:08 PM »

bahut khoob


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the soul shaker

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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2013, 02:04:45 AM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 07, 2013, 03:57:18 PM

nice

shukriya


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the soul shaker

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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2013, 02:05:27 AM »

Quote from: Farhan Sohail on April 07, 2013, 04:57:34 PM

very well, buht achay khayalat ko lafzon main dhalah hai, keep it up

shukriya sohail ji


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the soul shaker

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Re: Zameen pe chal naa sakaa aasmaan se bhi gyaa (NM)

«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2013, 02:06:40 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on April 07, 2013, 06:34:43 PM

waah waah excellent

Quote from: Sheba on April 07, 2013, 08:35:31 PM

bahut khoob sharing..............!

shukriya aap sabhi ka


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