ایک شعر

by Hammadzia on April 20, 2012, 11:45:09 AM

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Poetry Launge > Share Poetry You Like > Share: Poetry of Pain > Topic: ایک شعر

Pages: [1]

Author

(Read 1088 times)

Hammadzia

Guest

عیش وقتی کے لیے ہم ہی بچے تھے حماد؟
شہر میں اور بھی تھے چاہنے والے اس کے
(محمد حماد ضیا)


	Logged

sksaini4

Ustaad ae Shayari

Rau: 853

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011

Re: ایک شعر

«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2012, 12:08:28 PM »

agar aap roman men likhe to sabkee samajh aaye


	Logged

F.H.SIDDIQUI

Guest

Re: ایک شعر

«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2012, 12:29:04 PM »

Bahut khubsurat Sher hai , Hammad Zia saheb . Main bhi Saini saheb ki raai se muttafiq hoon... Urdu script mein post karna eik welcome initiative hai lekin Roman mein bhi dijiye taaki aapki kaavish uss aksariyat tak pahunche jo Urdu zubaan samajhti hai lekin Urdu rasmul khat se waquif nahin hai.Sher ke liye mubarakbaad .


	Logged

khujli

Guest

Re: ایک شعر

«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2012, 01:29:49 PM »

Quote from: Hammadzia on April 20, 2012, 11:45:09 AM

عیش وقتی کے لیے ہم ہی بچے تھے حماد؟
شہر میں اور بھی تھے چاہنے والے اس کے
(محمد حماد ضیا)

SHAYAD URDU KO MAIN ROMAN MEIN LIKH SAKOO.N.

aiyesh waqtee ke liye hum hee bache the hammad?
shahar mein aur bhee the chahane waale uske.

( mohammad hammad zia)


	Logged

sksaini4

Ustaad ae Shayari

Rau: 853

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011

Re: ایک شعر

«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2012, 03:03:58 PM »

Qalb saheb aapkee badaulat ek achhaa sher padhne ko mila.khai dono hazraat kaa dher saaraa shukriya


	Logged

masoom shahjada

Guest

Re: ایک شعر

«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2012, 06:42:43 AM »

Wow kya kahne.
Kya kah diya aapne.
Etna achcha sher maza aa gaya.


	Logged

Quateel Ahmad

Guest

Re: ایک شعر

«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2012, 06:51:01 AM »

Bahot Khoob... Hammad Sahab!


	Logged

Hammadzia

Guest

Re: ایک شعر

«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2012, 10:14:58 PM »

Thanks to all of you who like my "shair".Also thanks for your suggestion that i should write in roman.


	Logged

Pages: [1]

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Poetry Launge > Share Poetry You Like > Share: Poetry of Pain > Topic: ایک شعر

Jump to:

Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.

Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

on eTI community..

User

Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 05:16:51 PM

Recent Replies

mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...

by saahill

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...

by saahill

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL

by Michaelraw

[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

woh muj se mere khamoshi ...

by saahill

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...

by zarraa

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

Kal halki halki barish th...

by zarraa

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

कवि और कविता

by zarraa

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

parhezz ,,,, saahill

by zarraa

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...

by saahill

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...

by ASIF

[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]