बन्धिश

by aayushi on October 19, 2011, 04:58:26 PM
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कान्पती रुह ,
भीगी आन्खे ,
सिकुड्ता बदन ,
ऐसॆ ,
जॆसॆ , मानॊ ,
चॆहरे ने ओडाः हो कफ़न ,
सफ़र कटता नही ,
व्क्त गुजर जाता हॆ.
न जाने क्यु ,
वो बीता कल ही ,
नजर आता हॆ.
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2011, 05:10:08 PM »
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कान्पती रुह ,
भीगी आन्खे ,
सिकुड्ता बदन ,
ऐसॆ ,
जॆसॆ , मानॊ ,
चॆहरे ने ओडाः हो कफ़न ,
सफ़र कटता नही ,
व्क्त गुजर जाता हॆ.
न जाने क्यु ,
वो बीता कल ही ,
नजर आता हॆ.

bahut achcha likha hai aayushi ji. Likhte rahiye. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2011, 08:25:06 PM »
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Bahut khoob ...

achcha khayaal kaha hai " Safar katta nahi waqt guzarta
jata hai" kia baat hai ...

Humari daad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile   

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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2011, 12:14:49 AM »
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wah bahut khub
कान्पती रुह ,
भीगी आन्खे ,
सिकुड्ता बदन ,
ऐसॆ ,
जॆसॆ , मानॊ ,
चॆहरे ने ओडाः हो कफ़न ,
सफ़र कटता नही ,
व्क्त गुजर जाता हॆ.
न जाने क्यु ,
वो बीता कल ही ,
नजर आता हॆ.
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2011, 11:58:55 AM »
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Bahut khoob aayushi
Keep writing. bahut naayab likha hai.
What an imagination.
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