Faasla............................ surjit patar ji

by RAJAN KONDAL on December 16, 2013, 04:29:24 PM
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kamaal da likhde ne surjit patar ji .....




faasla Iss tarah hai jis tarah din raat vichla faasla
Meriyan reejhaan meri aukaat vichla faasla
lafz taa saau bahut ne, ya khuda banya rahe
meryan lafzaan mere jazbaat vichla faasla
haan main aape hi kiha si honth sucche rakhne
haaye par iss pyaas te uss baat vichla faasla
'je bahut hi pyaas hai taa met devaan' uss kiha
rishtyan te rishtyan de ghaat vichla faasla
dharm hai, ikhlaak hai, kanoon hai, eh kaun hai
meryan birkhaan teri barsaat vichla faasla
uss diyan gallan suno ki rang ki ki roshni
haaye par kirdaar te gallbaat vichla faasla
zehar da pyaala mere hothaan te aa ke ruk gya
reh gya mere ate sukraat vichla faasla]
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2013, 07:27:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob........
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2013, 09:35:31 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2013, 06:50:27 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 16, 2013, 07:27:32 PM
waah waah waah
Shukaria saini sir ap nay patar sahab ki kalam ko saraha
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2013, 06:52:15 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on December 16, 2013, 07:31:58 PM
Bahut khoob........
Miraj ji bhut shukaria jo ap ko yeh ghazal pasand ahi
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 16, 2013, 08:49:51 PM
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bahut khoob
Shukaria suresh ji
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