kahin koi aisa bhi hota hai

by shraddha the poetess on August 04, 2013, 03:18:18 PM
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kehte hain ki maa se bachche ka rishta sabse ooncha hota hai..,
ek bachcha maa k aanchal mei lakhon sapne sanjota hai..
par kahin koi aisa hota hai-jo us aanchal k bina hi sota hai...
haan kahin koi aisa bhi hota hai..........!
kahin koi khushiyon k beej bota hai..,
 koi har pal khushiyaan khota hai...
maa ki god mei koi chain se sota hai...,,
 usi god se door koi raat bhar rota hai....
uske aansu pochhne wala koi ni hota hai ...
haan kahin koi aisa bhi hota hai..
kahin koi khushiyon k ujaalon mei sunder bhavishya sanjota hai
koi dukhon k andheron mei apni nanhi aashayein tak khota hai...
koi khushiyaan batorta hi kahin...
to kahi koi dukhon ka pahaar dhota hai..
haan kahin koi aisa bhi hota hai...
maa ki kadrr us bachhe se poochho...
jo uske pyar ki aarzoo khuda se kr k rota hai
poochho zara k bina maa k kya mehsoos hota hai..
 hum to khushnaseeb hain prrr   kahin koi aisa bhi hota hai...!11

shraddha.....
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2013, 06:11:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2013, 09:39:36 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2013, 12:29:53 AM »
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aaj ke samay mein mai dekhti hoon k kahin na kahin aaj kal k bachche apne mata pita ko wo sammaan ya pyaar nahi de paa rahe jo isse phle k bachche diya karte the karan sirf ye hai k wo y samajh nahi pate ki wo maa jise hum for granted le rahe hain aaj bhi lakhon k liye sapna hai...khwaab hai ek maa ka pyaar ...hum sabko apne mata pita ki kadrrr krni chahiye....isi uddeshya se likhi maine ye kavita,,,,,
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2013, 04:24:26 AM »
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bahot khoooob lajawaab tareef se bala'tar  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2013, 04:30:02 PM »
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waah waah.. bahut achhe.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2013, 06:33:17 PM »
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than u so much to u all....

dhanyawaad k apne meri kavita ko sarhaya...
apke comments k roop me, apki duaon ko maine paaya....
 so thank u all

shraddha..... icon_salut
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2013, 05:13:31 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2013, 04:08:34 PM »
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thank u so much prashad ji........
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 03:15:16 AM »
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Its Beautiful .....
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2013, 04:15:10 PM »
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beautiful..Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2013, 04:59:46 PM »
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NICE LINES DEAR
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2013, 05:00:30 PM »
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thnx bhupinder ji..
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2013, 05:01:02 PM »
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thnx rashmeett ji.
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2013, 05:13:51 PM »
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aapki kavita kafi achhi hai, isi par meri k koshish:

kahin koi
aisa hota hai
jo bina kambal ke sota hai
jo thithurta hai
raaton me
aur peeke
aansoo rota hai
wo shayd mehnatkash nahi
kisika bojh dhona
do roti ko rona
fi bhi jeena
kuchh na kehna
wo shayd paththar hota hai
sadakon pe
bikhra hota hai
pairoN ki thokar khata
kahin koi aisa hota hai ?

Abhi Tamrakar

 
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