संभलने तो दीजिये।

by ManishTiwari on March 10, 2014, 06:27:22 PM
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संभले हैं ज़रा और संभलने तो दीजिये।
कुछ देर लहू और उबलने तो  दीजिये।

सोचे हैं जो भी मैंने, वो पुरे करूँगा काम,
थोडा सा मेरा वक्त बदलने तो दीजिये।

तप के निखर आएगी शख्शियत मेरी,
हमराह मुझे आग पर चलने तो दीजिये।

ये शीशमहल दौडकर क़दमों में आयेगें ,
तरकश से मेरे तीर निकलने तो दीजिये।

माहौल बदल जायेगा कुछ देर में मनीष,
जेहनों में जमी बर्फ पिघलने तो दीजिये।
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2014, 06:29:47 PM »
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Waah Manish Jee, Bhaut hi khoobsurat or energetic lines hain, Dheron daad aapko is pyaari si ghazal ke liye...
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2014, 06:43:08 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2014, 07:01:10 PM »
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संभले हैं ज़रा और संभलने तो दीजिये।
कुछ देर लहू और उबलने तो  दीजिये।

सोचे हैं जो भी मैंने, वो पुरे करूँगा काम,
थोडा सा मेरा वक्त बदलने तो दीजिये।

तप के निखर आएगी शख्शियत मेरी,
हमराह मुझे आग पर चलने तो दीजिये।

ये शीशमहल दौडकर क़दमों में आयेगें ,
तरकश से मेरे तीर निकलने तो दीजिये।

माहौल बदल जायेगा कुछ देर में मनीष,
जेहनों में जमी बर्फ पिघलने तो दीजिये।

So Sweet,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2014, 07:09:35 PM »
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bahut aache..........
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beautiful sharing manish ji....


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Bahut khoooooooob...
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Wah Wah!!! La-Jawaab!!! Bohat Hi Acche!

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धन्यवाद !
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