My love,I wanna die! (mazHur)

by mazHur on January 23, 2014, 05:16:25 AM
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IN MEMORIUM OF MY WIFE

Before you became a star in the sky
Let my love come to you, let me try
Lunging at my love bird moving high
Umbrella in hand, harsh weather nigh
If you went alone my heart will ever cry
Take me along, my love,I wanna die!
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2014, 05:30:23 AM »
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Mind Blowing Creation.
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2014, 08:19:15 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2014, 08:44:18 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on January 23, 2014, 05:30:23 AM
Mind Blowing Creation.

Thank you, Wakeel Sahib, for your Kind appreciation and comment.
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2014, 08:46:10 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 23, 2014, 08:19:15 AM
waah waah

Dhanebad!
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2014, 01:35:20 PM »
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So Sorry !  I can feel the pain.
May her soul  rest in peace . Amen
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2014, 01:37:34 PM »
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very sad but true shardhanjali, may her soul rest in peace
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2014, 04:29:24 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on January 23, 2014, 05:16:25 AM


IN MEMORIUM OF MY WIFE

Before you became a star in the sky
Let my love come to you, let me try
Lunging at my love bird moving high
Umbrella in hand, harsh weather nigh
If you went alone my heart will ever cry
Take me along, my love,I wanna die!




very nice poem instinct feelings but don't wish to die ever  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2014, 05:18:39 PM »
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Thanks,Sheba jee.

Marnay Walay ke Saath Kon Mara?
Chund Din Roya Dhoya Bhool Gaya!
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2014, 05:20:45 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 23, 2014, 01:35:20 PM
So Sorry !  I can feel the pain.
May her soul  rest in peace . Amen


Thank you, my friend, life is like that!
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2014, 05:21:53 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 23, 2014, 01:37:34 PM
very sad but true shardhanjali, may her soul rest in peace

Thank you for your kind words.
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2014, 07:28:29 PM »
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nice lines.. Usual Smile
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