NAGIN BIRAH KI HAYE RE DASNE LAGI ...........By "Aarish"

by Aarish on September 03, 2012, 01:30:08 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 03, 2012, 10:30:04 AM »
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waah beta waah geet men bhee achhaa muqaam rakhte ho badhaai
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«Reply #16 on: September 03, 2012, 12:49:46 PM »
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bahut khoob, Arish ji.ye naya aandaz bhi bahut pyara hai.likhte rahiye.khuda zor e qalam deta rahe.
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«Reply #17 on: September 04, 2012, 04:18:27 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 03, 2012, 01:30:08 AM
Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,
 
 Lekin sakhi ri aaNkh se aansu nikal gaye,


 Kaase kahuN tohre bina lage nahi jiya,        (Kaase = kaise )

 Kahe gaya bideswa julmi morey piya            (Morey = Mere )


 Dekhe kabhi jo pyaar ke sapne hi jal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin Sakhi ri aaNkh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Bairan hawa ye shool si chubhne lagi mujhe,

 Nagin birah ki haye re dasne lagi mujhe,


 Tum to badal ke jindagi najreN badaL gaye,            (Jindagi = Zindagi / NajreN = NazreN )


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Koyal kuhu kuhu kare pi pi papihara,

 kari ghata ko dekhkar jalta hai man mora,            ( Kari = kali )


 Ab ke baras bhi pyaar ke mosam nikal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye..

 


                 " Aarish"




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«Reply #18 on: September 04, 2012, 08:08:06 PM »
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Waah waah Aarish bhai, zabardast, kya khoob likha hai bhai aapne. Maza aa gaya padh ke. DhroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #19 on: September 05, 2012, 12:45:22 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 03, 2012, 10:30:04 AM
waah beta waah geet men bhee achhaa muqaam rakhte ho badhaai
shukriya saini sir......yuNhi hausla afzai karte rahiyega...
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«Reply #20 on: September 05, 2012, 12:46:03 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 05, 2012, 12:45:22 AM
shukriya saini sir......yuNhi hausla afzai karte rahiyega...
shukriya hasan sir, aapki sarparasti ki zaroorat hai...
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«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2012, 12:50:26 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on September 04, 2012, 08:08:06 PM
Waah waah Aarish bhai, zabardast, kya khoob likha hai bhai aapne. Maza aa gaya padh ke. DhroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.
shukriya ahmed bhai... aise pyaar banaye rakhyega
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«Reply #22 on: September 05, 2012, 12:56:07 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut badiya  Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: September 05, 2012, 01:04:18 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 05, 2012, 12:56:07 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut badiya  Thumbs UP Usual Smile
shukriya suman ji...
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«Reply #24 on: September 27, 2012, 05:40:48 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 03, 2012, 01:30:08 AM
Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,
 
 Lekin sakhi ri aaNkh se aansu nikal gaye,


 Kaase kahuN tohre bina lage nahi jiya,        (Kaase = kaise )

 Kahe gaya bideswa julmi morey piya            (Morey = Mere )


 Dekhe kabhi jo pyaar ke sapne hi jal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin Sakhi ri aaNkh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Bairan hawa ye shool si chubhne lagi mujhe,

 Nagin birah ki haye re dasne lagi mujhe,


 Tum to badal ke jindagi najreN badaL gaye,            (Jindagi = Zindagi / NajreN = NazreN )


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Koyal kuhu kuhu kare pi pi papihara,

 kari ghata ko dekhkar jalta hai man mora,            ( Kari = kali )


 Ab ke baras bhi pyaar ke mosam nikal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye..

 


                 " Aarish"



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: October 21, 2012, 06:47:08 AM »
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shukriya adil ji bohut nawazish
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«Reply #26 on: November 27, 2012, 10:45:38 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 03, 2012, 01:30:08 AM
Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,
 
 Lekin sakhi ri aaNkh se aansu nikal gaye,


 Kaase kahuN tohre bina lage nahi jiya,        (Kaase = kaise )

 Kahe gaya bideswa julmi morey piya            (Morey = Mere )


 Dekhe kabhi jo pyaar ke sapne hi jal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin Sakhi ri aaNkh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Bairan hawa ye shool si chubhne lagi mujhe,

 Nagin birah ki haye re dasne lagi mujhe,


 Tum to badal ke jindagi najreN badaL gaye,            (Jindagi = Zindagi / NajreN = NazreN )


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Koyal kuhu kuhu kare pi pi papihara,

 kari ghata ko dekhkar jalta hai man mora,            ( Kari = kali )


 Ab ke baras bhi pyaar ke mosam nikal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye..

 


                 " Aarish"



just superb, sir
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«Reply #27 on: November 27, 2012, 10:48:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: November 27, 2012, 02:02:16 PM »
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shukriya sanjeev jee
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 Applause nice
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