मेरे मुँह पर ताला पड़ गया

by klaskar on August 31, 2010, 10:58:30 AM
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घर के हर कोने में ज़ाला पड़ गया,
एक फ़ूहड़ सी बीबी से पाला पड़ गया.

रोज़ अन्डे लेकर वो खाती थी उधार,
मेरे पीछे मुर्गी वाला पड़ गया.

रात मेरे हाथ से पिटती वो खूब,
बीच में कम्बख्त साला पड़ गया.

वो तो मेक़ अप करके गोरी हो गयी,
और मेरा रंग काला पड़ गया.

नोट करती खर्च वो पानी की तरह,
और मेरी जेब का दीवाला पिट गया.

वो तो मैना की तरह टर्राए है खूब,
और मेरे मुँह पर ताला पड़ गया.....


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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 11:12:19 AM »
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Ras parivartan....achha hai....
Kapil ji agar Sach me eysi mil gayee tou...!!!! Winking Winking Winking
Sab kavitaayen raddi me bech khayegi..... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 12:20:24 PM »
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hahahahahah... ek dum sahi kahaa aapne... ye poem especially maine aapke liye hi post kiya tha... bahut udaasi waale poem padhwa liye maine aur aapki di ne....!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 31, 2010, 11:12:19 AM
Ras parivartan....achha hai....
Kapil ji agar Sach me eysi mil gayee tou...!!!! Winking Winking Winking
Sab kavitaayen raddi me bech khayegi..... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 05:40:52 PM »
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Good shareing kapil ji........Dhayaan rakhna dost kahin Koyal ki baat sach na ho jaaye....
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 05:50:17 PM »
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thnx kapil ...for this mastam post........
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 07:49:38 PM »
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Thank you Anaam ji... agar ho bhi gayi unki baat sach to kuch nahi kar sakte... Usual Smile

Quote from: ANAAM on August 31, 2010, 05:40:52 PM
Good shareing kapil ji........Dhayaan rakhna dost kahin Koyal ki baat sach na ho jaaye....
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mujhe thanks nahi aapki muskaan chahiye bas...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 05:50:17 PM
thnx kapil ...for this mastam post........
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 10:07:14 PM »
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Good one Kapil - nice sharing
Kahin aisi aap ko na mil jaaye
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thanks a lot Rajesh ji... nahi sir aisi duwaayen mat dijiye... Usual Smile

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 31, 2010, 10:07:14 PM
Good one Kapil - nice sharing
Kahin aisi aap ko na mil jaaye
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2010, 09:15:14 AM »
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kapil g goooooooooooooood sharing lurk lurk lurk lurk lurk lurk
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2010, 10:39:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji...!!!

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