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by ramspathak on July 30, 2013, 04:42:35 PM
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विरह की आग में जलता रहा हूँ!
मै अब तो राख बनता जा रहा हूँ!!

किया है कत्‍ल किसने क्‍या बताऊँ
सभी को ख़ुदकुशी बतला रहा हूँ!!

कभी कोई मुझे भी खत लिखेगा
सभी को तो पता लिखवा रहा हूँ !!

ये तेरी ही जुदाई है की हरदम!
तेरी यादों से दिल बहला रहा हूँ!!

लगाकर आग बस्ती में कहे वो
दिया हूँ रौशनी फैला रहा हूँ!!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2013, 04:48:08 PM »
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(बह्र: बहरे हज़ज़ मुसद्दस महजूफ)1222 1222 122

विरह की आग में जलता रहा हूँ!
मै अब तो राख बनता जा रहा हूँ!!

किया है कत्‍ल किसने क्‍या बताऊँ
सभी को ख़ुदकुशी बतला रहा हूँ!!

कभी कोई मुझे भी खत लिखेगा
सभी को तो पता लिखवा रहा हूँ !!

ये तेरी ही जुदाई है की हरदम!
तेरी यादों से दिल बहला रहा हूँ!!

लगाकर आग बस्ती में कहे वो
दिया हूँ रौशनी फैला रहा हूँ!!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"

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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2013, 05:00:41 PM »
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excellent dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2013, 05:01:27 PM »
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bahut khooooob pathak ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2013, 06:20:54 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2013, 07:02:34 PM »
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bahoot bahoot khoob
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2013, 08:48:35 PM »
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waah waah pathak sahab.. maja aa gaya.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2013, 10:33:50 PM »
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Good One Sir.
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2013, 12:17:52 AM »
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Excellent Deepak jee, bahut bahut khoob, bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal, DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se. YuN hi likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye.
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Bahut bahut khoob
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