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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2011, 08:05:13 AM »
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teri khamoshi bhi samajh le ge nirala,
pilaa de mujhe ek jaam ka pyaalaa



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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2011, 05:05:44 PM »
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teri khamoshi bhi samajh le ge nirala,
pilaa de mujhe ek jaam ka pyaalaa



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gar smjhte ho meri khamoshi
smjh le fir…
yahi hai jaam chaa jdyegi khud b khud tujhpar madhoshi
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2011, 05:54:28 PM »
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Hmmm...

 Bahoot Khoob Adil  Usual Smile Nice Reply Nirala ji!

Kya Samjhe teri Khamoshi Ko Eh " Dost "
Yea Teri Dadkhane Sab Bayan Kar Jati hai... !!!!

~Sophi~
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2011, 06:09:01 PM »
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wah sophi ji…
nice reply
thanx
Hmmm...

 Bahoot Khoob Adil  Usual Smile Nice Reply Nirala ji!

Kya Samjhe teri Khamoshi Ko Eh " Dost "
Yea Teri Dadkhane Sab Bayan Kar Jati hai... !!!!

~Sophi~
unhe gar chahat hai meri khamoshi ko smjhne ki
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ee dost
hum apni dhadkane bhi khamosh kar jayenge…
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2011, 06:15:45 PM »
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 Awwww.. Aisi kya beruki Unse ? But Bahoot Khoob Likha hai

Tumari Dhadkano se Meri Saanse judi hai
Agar Hui yea Khamosh tho Hum Fanaa Ho Jayege...

~ Sophi~~
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2011, 06:51:20 PM »
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uff…
sophi ji…kar di na aapne poetic petrol wali shayri…
lajawaab lines

itna woh kar na sake
sang hamare chal na sake
dhadkane jab humari khamosh hone ko ayi
kahne lage woh dubara…
bin aapke hum rah na sake
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2011, 06:59:49 PM »
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uff…
sophi ji…kar di na aapne poetic petrol wali shayri…
lajawaab lines

itna woh kar na sake
sang hamare chal na sake
dhadkane jab humari khamosh hone ko ayi
kahne lage woh dubara…
bin aapke hum rah na sake

Hahha.. Thank you Thank you Usual Smile

Bahoot Khoob !!!

Teri Chahat Mujhe Tujhse Door Hone Nahi Deti
Aur tu Hai Ki , Mera Rootna bhi Seh Nahi Pata... !!!


~Divya~
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2011, 07:12:23 PM »
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Hahha.. Thank you Thank you Usual Smile

Bahoot Khoob !!!

Teri Chahat Mujhe Tujhse Door Hone Nahi Deti
Aur tu Hai Ki , Mera Rootna bhi Seh Nahi Pata... !!!


~Divya~
kya bat hai ji…too gud

humdard hi jab rooth jaaye
ee dilbar…
jeene ka taqaaza fir kya hoga!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2011, 07:16:07 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

Pyaar Mea Rootna Manana Na ho tho
Pyaar Mea Rang Kahana Se aayega
Tu Jo Roota Hoga Mujhe Agar
Tujhe tadpa Kar Manane Mea maza ayega

Fir Dekh Lena tu Hasega bhi
Aur Fir Mujhe Gale Bhi Lagayega
leke Mujhe Bahoon mein Kahega
Kahega, Tere Bin Ab Na raha Jayega.. !!!


Divya
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2011, 07:29:50 PM »
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oye hoye… Usual Smile

kab se hain taiyar sanam
failakar banhen
tum rutho to sahi
uff na karenge,na bharenge aanhen…
jakad ke apni banho me fir
labon se laali le lenge
ruthi rahogi kab tak fir
hum wo sringaari denge
………zoom………
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2011, 07:34:06 PM »
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ahem ahem... Kya baat hai ...

Itna kehte ho, tho Hum Root jaate hai
Teri Sanson Mein Behkar toot Jate hai

Lo Manao ab , Jitna Mana sakte ho
Fir Na Kehna, Tum Rooto Hum Manane aate hai !!!  crybaby2

~Divya ~

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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2011, 07:50:41 PM »
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ailaa…aap to serious ho gaee… !!!!

chlo tm ruth hi jao
jam kar pahle aansu bahao ( magarmachi )

yun na bikhro tm toot kar saanso me
mere in dhadkano par taras khao

tujhse hi rawaan hai
chadhti ye parwaan hai

na rutho ab maan bhi jao
mere nazuk dil ki tu permanent mehmaan hai… Usual Smile

uff ladkiyon ko manana jalebi se bhi seedha hai sad5
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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2011, 08:01:59 PM »
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hahaha Giggle Giggle Giggle

Aise Koi kisi ko manata bhi hai Uffffffffffff

Magarmachi Ansoo Nahi Yea Mera Pyaar Hai
Oh Jaana, tujhse Hi Juda Mera sansaar hai

Tu Din hai, Aur Main Raat Hun Teri Dost
Tere Bina Jeena , Mera Dushwaar Hai...

Itna Mana Rahe Ho , tho Maan Jati hun
Kyunki Iss DIl ko Sirf Tumse Hi Pyaar Hai   tongue3



~Divya ~




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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2011, 06:05:39 AM »
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tere inhi aansuo paqt sanam,mera eetvar hai
janta hun,marchi nahi ye sacha tera pyar hai…

mai din,tu raat hai khili chandni sa
meri dhadkno ke chatak ko,tere aahat ka pal pal intzar hai…


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uff…sophi ji! aap jesa khumaar hum apne shabdon me nai la skte…
sad5sad5

kamaal likhti ho tussi…
u r 2 good ji Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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