3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI :Shairi - E

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दर्द-ए-ग़म को छुपाते रहे |

  दर्द दिल का बढाते रहे ||

   बस इसी कशमकश में सदा |

      ख़ुद पे हम बौखलाते रहे ||

राह अपनी बनाते रहे |

  नक़्श मेरे मिटाते रहे ||

   लूट कर घर मेरा वो मुझे |

   साफ़ दामन दिखाते रहे ||

हर क़दम पर सताते रहे |

  ख़ुद को रहबर बताते रहे ||

   बेबसी में जो हम रो दिए |

   उनके लब मुस्कुराते रहे ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

Dard-e-gham ko chhupaate rahe.
  Dard dil kaa badhaate rahe.
   Bas isee kashmkash meN sadaa.
   Khud pe ham baukhlaate rahe.

Raah apnee banaate rahe.
  Naqsh mere mitaate rahe.
   Loot kar ghar meraa vo mujhe.
   Saaf daaman dikhaate rahe.

Har qadam par sataate rahe.
  Khud ko rahbar bataate rahe.
   Bebasee meN jo ham ro diye.
   Unke lab muskuraate rahe.

Dr.Surendra Saini


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2012, 05:29:51 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB - TEENON.


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mkv

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2012, 05:44:19 AM »

Kya kahne..laajavaab Applause

bahut khoob likha hai Sir


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Aarish

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2012, 05:52:09 AM »

Sir teeno muktak lajwab hain khaskar pehla wala to kamaal hai,dheron daad aur mubarakbad


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kamlesh.yadav001

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2012, 10:23:29 AM »

waah chhoti-chhoti line badi-badi baaten


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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2012, 10:25:27 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 13, 2012, 05:17:20 AM

दर्द-ए-ग़म को छुपाते रहे |

दर्द दिल का बढाते रहे ||

बस इसी कशमकश में सदा |

ख़ुद पे हम बौखलाते रहे ||

राह अपनी बनाते रहे |

नक़्श मेरे मिटाते रहे ||

लूट कर घर मेरा वो मुझे |

साफ़ दामन दिखाते रहे ||

हर क़दम पर सताते रहे |

ख़ुद को रहबर बताते रहे ||

बेबसी में जो हम रो दिए |

उनके लब मुस्कुराते रहे ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

Dard-e-gham ko chhupaate rahe.
Dard dil kaa badhaate rahe.
Bas isee kashmkash meN sadaa.
Khud pe ham baukhlaate rahe.

Raah apnee banaate rahe.
Naqsh mere mitaate rahe.
Loot kar ghar meraa vo mujhe.
Saaf daaman dikhaate rahe.

Har qadam par sataate rahe.
Khud ko rahbar bataate rahe.
Bebasee meN jo ham ro diye.
Unke lab muskuraate rahe.

Dr.Surendra Saini

Bahut behtrien muktak Sir, Ye andaaz bhi apkaa bahut umda raha DehroN mubarakbaad qabool kariye ...............


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himanshuIITR

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2012, 10:27:30 AM »

bahut bahut hee khob


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2012, 11:50:24 AM »

Bahut hi khoob Saini Jee, kaafi achha laga. Dheron daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.


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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2012, 11:50:45 AM »

waaah waaaah sainiji... bahut khub janab...

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2012, 01:10:24 PM »

bahut bahut khoob Saini ji.....!!!


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soudagar

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2012, 05:13:39 PM »

bahut hi lajawab saini sir, bahut badhiya bahut mubarkbaad...........

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ParwaaZ

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2012, 05:33:50 PM »

Saini Sahaab Aadaab!

bahut khoob janab bahut khoob ... bade hi bhavpurn muktak
hai... Humari dheroN dili daad aur mubbarakbad kabul kijiye

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2012, 06:27:02 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 13, 2012, 05:17:20 AM

दर्द-ए-ग़म को छुपाते रहे |

दर्द दिल का बढाते रहे ||

बस इसी कशमकश में सदा |

ख़ुद पे हम बौखलाते रहे ||

राह अपनी बनाते रहे |

नक़्श मेरे मिटाते रहे ||

लूट कर घर मेरा वो मुझे |

साफ़ दामन दिखाते रहे ||

हर क़दम पर सताते रहे |

ख़ुद को रहबर बताते रहे ||

बेबसी में जो हम रो दिए |

उनके लब मुस्कुराते रहे ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

Dard-e-gham ko chhupaate rahe.
Dard dil kaa badhaate rahe.
Bas isee kashmkash meN sadaa.
Khud pe ham baukhlaate rahe.

Raah apnee banaate rahe.
Naqsh mere mitaate rahe.
Loot kar ghar meraa vo mujhe.
Saaf daaman dikhaate rahe.

Har qadam par sataate rahe.
Khud ko rahbar bataate rahe.
Bebasee meN jo ham ro diye.
Unke lab muskuraate rahe.

Dr.Surendra Saini

veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice SKS. TEENO MEIN 3 KAIFIYAT . ONE RAU


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anand mohan

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2012, 06:48:20 PM »

BEHATAREEN. BAHOOT KHOOB


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sksaini4

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Re: 3 मुक्तक/ 3 Muktak............................SAINI

«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2012, 03:58:59 AM »

Hasan bhai jaan bahut bahut shukriya


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