A dedication to My Loving SIS... {{ANGEL}}

by angel4u on April 01, 2009, 06:10:37 PM
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This is the first attempt i m making to write something other than dard or ishq.. This poem s dedicated to my sister. i may have gone off beat or have taken it to too much length. sorry for that, could not avoid that... but it is the picture of old days which will never come back... MISS YOU SIS... LOVE YOU...



Aaj Jo Mila Hai Mujhe Ye Band Sandook Akele Kamre Mein,
Dekhun To Kya Bandha Hai Isme Kya Hai Is Taale Ki Aad Mein,

Dekh Ab Tak Isme Hai Teri Udaas Gudiyan, Toote Khilone,
Ye Bejaan Khilone Bhi Mayoos Hai Bas Teri Yaad Mein,

Ye Teri Chhoti Chhoti Chudiyan, Ye Teri Khankhanati Paayal,
Yaad Hai Mujhe Inhe Ek Din Toda Tha Maine Gusse Mein,

Ye Aangan Jo Chehekta Tha Teri Meri Kachhi Shararaton Se,
Dekh Ye Ped Dhundta Hai Teri Masoomiyat Harek Shaakh Mein,

Dekh Ye Ghar Ki Deewarein Dheere Rang Kho Rahi Hai Apna,
Inhi Pe Likhte The Hum Naam Apna Rang Birangi Pencil Mein,

Ye Kaisi Hai Riwayatein Ke Beti Hamesha Hi Parayi Hoti Hai,
Kyon Bandh Gaya, Simat Gaya Wo Apnapan Kisi Riwaj Ki Dor Mein,

Kehti Thi Tu Mujhe Apni Nanhi Pari, Aaj Ye Pari Udaas Hai,
Kahan Hai Wo Jaaduyi Chhadi Jisse Aajaye Tu Mere Paas Mein,

Tujhe Rulaya Bahut, Par Mera Har Aansu Samet Liya Tune Apne Aanchal Mein,
Aaj Senkdon Aansu Behte Hai Bas Usi Aanchal Ke Makhmali Dard Mein,

Maanga Tha Tune Mujhse Anjaane Me Wo Jo Mera Tha,
Kya Wo De Dun Tujhe To Tu Aa Jayegi Mere Paas Mein??

Kaha Tha Vida Hote Samay Khayal Rakhna Mummy Papa Ka,
Kaise Pochhu Wo Ashqon Ke Moti Teri Tasveer Ho Jis Mein,

Tere Pyaar Ka Qarz Kabhi Na Main Chuka Paaungi Is Janam Me,
Kyon Na Apni Saari Khushiya De Du,Teri Ek Muskurahat Ke Avez Mein,

Tujhe Koi Gam Na Chhue Na Teri Aankh Kabhi Nam Ho Meri Behna,
Dua Hamesha Hai, Ashq Bhoole Pata Teri Palkon Ki Qataron Mein...
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2009, 07:31:58 PM »
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Angel, dil ko chhuu liya is peshkash ne....ek ek line kai baar padhi...mere paas lafz nahin is mohabbat ke liye kich likhun....Bohot Khoob...Allah aap ko aur aapki behan ko humesha khushion se nawaze..Ameen.
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2009, 02:46:44 AM »
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Thank You So much Celmira for appreciating my work...

Sach ab to yehi dua hai Allah se ke she gets all the happiness of her life..

Thanks so much for your kind wishes...
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2009, 02:52:01 AM »
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Wooow bahut khoob. Her alfaz dil ko chua. Bahut accha likhi hai tumne. Lucky sis.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2009, 02:54:30 AM »
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Thank you so much roja.. Right i really am a lucky sister...
today missing my sis a lot......  tearyeyed
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2009, 04:20:23 AM »
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Bohat khoob subhan_allah Huzena jee..

Mujhe yaqeen hain jitna tum use miss kar rahi ho woh bhi tumhe utna hi miss kar rahi hogi.....
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2009, 04:51:14 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob,Har Ek Lafz,Dil Ko Chuta Hai..Yeh Rishta Hi Kuch Aisa Hai,Ke Padhte-padhte Ankhein Nam Ho Hi Jaati hai..Bahut Bahut ache Angel!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2009, 08:58:31 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 02, 2009, 04:20:23 AM
Bohat khoob subhan_allah Huzena jee..

Mujhe yaqeen hain jitna tum use miss kar rahi ho woh bhi tumhe utna hi miss kar rahi hogi.....

Hmmm...

Shukriya bahut bahut..
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2009, 01:02:08 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob,Har Ek Lafz,Dil Ko Chuta Hai..Yeh Rishta Hi Kuch Aisa Hai,Ke Padhte-padhte Ankhein Nam Ho Hi Jaati hai..Bahut Bahut ache Angel!!!!

Shukriya Khwaish Ji...
Aapko pasand aaya yehi poem ki sabse badi taarif hai... 
sahi hai, ye rishta aisa hi hai, jab wo paas thi tab khoob jhagde. chhoti chhoti chizon ke liye, par aaj wohi chizein yaad karke aankhein namm ho jaati hia...
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2009, 01:11:44 PM »
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I dont have word to express. But the way u expressed ur emotion Ur feelings that is superb!

God bless Her & u too..

Love
Divya
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2009, 01:13:12 PM »
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Thanks sophi..
My wishes with you too for a beautiful and loving life ahead.
Take care,
God Bless You...
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2009, 02:53:09 PM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah,.

Mujhe Pardhte Pardhte Thoda Rona Bhi Aagaya, Ke Aap Dono behno Mein Kitna Pyaar Tha karke,.

Bas Meri behan Itna Hi Duaa Karoonga, ke Malik, Aap Dono KHush Rakhein,. Aap Dono Ko Jahana Aabaad rakhe,.

Aur Tamaan Un Behno Ka, Jo Apni behan, Bhai Se Judaa Hui Hain, Allah Unhe, Khush Rakhe,.

Aameen,.
Ya Rabul Aa Lameen,.
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«Reply #12 on: April 03, 2009, 03:24:48 PM »
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Tumhari duwaon ke liye bahut bahut shukriya azeem...

Meri bhi yehi dua hai ke ALLAH har behen aur har bhai ko khoob saari khushiyan dein.. Aur juda karein bhi to bhi unpe apna karam rakhein...
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«Reply #13 on: April 03, 2009, 03:38:02 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on April 03, 2009, 03:24:48 PM

Tumhari duwaon ke liye bahut bahut shukriya azeem...

Meri bhi yehi dua hai ke ALLAH har behen aur har bhai ko khoob saari khushiyan dein.. Aur juda karein bhi to bhi unpe apna karam rakhein...

Aameen,.
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«Reply #14 on: April 03, 2009, 04:07:04 PM »
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jazbaat ki khoobsurat akasi ki gae hai.
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