A ! NAZAR SE NAZAR MILAAO NA

by waquif ansari on July 16, 2010, 11:50:17 AM
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A ! nazar se nazar milaao na
Tirchhi nazroN se gul khilaao na

Tum ko apna bana liya hum ne
Tum bhi apna hameiN banaao na

Door tak haath thaam kar mera
Ishq ki rasm kuchh nibhaao na

Dekho taRpeNge raat bhar yooNhi
Is qadar zulm dil pe Dhaao na

Aa gaye ho hamaari khwaboN meiN
Zindagi meiN chale bhi aao na

Ab mulaaqaat phir kahaN hogi
Chupke chupke mujhe bataao na

Door kyuN ho hamaari nazroN se
Aao WAQUIF qareeb aao na
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 12:00:06 PM »
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 Applause Applause  fir se bahoot umda waquif sahab....dad kabool karen
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2010, 12:16:50 PM »
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aakne jo gazalpesh ki hai kuch usi andaaz me kehna chahungi kuch.....

rasmon ko chhod k tod k tum
mujhe ab apne ghar le jao na

mujhe mang lo zaalim zamane se
na maane zamana to isse lad jao na

ye  paak mahobbat hai mere sanam
aaj iski ibaadat tum kar jao na

khuda ki neymat se mile ho tum mujhe
ab karo na ruswa aao mere ban jao na...!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 12:49:14 PM »
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Wah bahot hi khoob kaha hai Waqif sahab. Aapka ye andaaz pahli baar dekhne ko mila. Bahot hi umda ghazal nawaza hai is me mehfil ko. Afreen sad afreen.

Mujhko dar lagta hai andhere se
Jald koi diyaa jalaao na


 
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2010, 02:04:47 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Waqif ji... aur Kasak ji aapke jawaab ka bhi jawaab nahi...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2010, 04:55:03 AM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on July 16, 2010, 11:50:17 AM
A ! nazar se nazar milaao na
Tirchhi nazroN se gul khilaao na

Tum ko apna bana liya hum ne
Tum bhi apna hameiN banaao na

Door tak haath thaam kar mera
Ishq ki rasm kuchh nibhaao na

Dekho taRpeNge raat bhar yooNhi
Is qadar zulm dil pe Dhaao na

Aa gaye ho hamaari khwaboN meiN
Zindagi meiN chale bhi aao na

Ab mulaaqaat phir kahaN hogi
Chupke chupke mujhe bataao na

Door kyuN ho hamaari nazroN se
Aao WAQUIF qareeb aao na


Very Impressive creation.....ansari sahab ! dil se daad !
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2010, 08:04:09 PM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on July 16, 2010, 11:50:17 AM
A ! nazar se nazar milaao na
Tirchhi nazroN se gul khilaao na

Tum ko apna bana liya hum ne
Tum bhi apna hameiN banaao na

Door tak haath thaam kar mera
Ishq ki rasm kuchh nibhaao na

Dekho taRpeNge raat bhar yooNhi
Is qadar zulm dil pe Dhaao na

Aa gaye ho hamaari khwaboN meiN
Zindagi meiN chale bhi aao na

Ab mulaaqaat phir kahaN hogi
Chupke chupke mujhe bataao na

Door kyuN ho hamaari nazroN se
Aao WAQUIF qareeb aao na


Waah ! WAQUIF Sahab aapka ye sadghi aur shararat ka naya andaaz behad khoobsurat laga... Hazaron daad hazir karta hun kabool farmayen.

Jinko chaha ho toot kar tumne
Raaz-e-dil unse ab chhupao na

Fir mulaqaat ho 'Adab' apni
Aisa ek silsila chalao na..
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2010, 09:08:04 PM »
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Wah wah W,ansari ji bahut baddiya.lovely lines by Pandey ji. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2010, 08:51:48 AM »
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Janab e Man Bekarar Saheb! Aap ne apni khoobsurat aara se nawaaza is ka bahut bahut shukriya janab.

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Quote from: bekarar on July 16, 2010, 12:00:06 PM
Applause Applause  fir se bahoot umda waquif sahab....dad kabool karen
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2010, 09:44:43 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob wah wah waquif sb...riyaz sb ki baat se mein bhi ittefaq dikhata hoon yehi ke aap ka yeh andaaz pehli baar dekhne ko mila..hazaro daad
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2010, 07:09:58 AM »
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Bahut shukriya Kasak Ji aur shukriya is baat ka bhi k aapne apne andaaz meiN is ghazal ki tarjumaani ki, achchha laga.

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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 16, 2010, 12:16:50 PM
aakne jo gazalpesh ki hai kuch usi andaaz me kehna chahungi kuch.....

rasmon ko chhod k tod k tum
mujhe ab apne ghar le jao na

mujhe mang lo zaalim zamane se
na maane zamana to isse lad jao na

ye  paak mahobbat hai mere sanam
aaj iski ibaadat tum kar jao na

khuda ki neymat se mile ho tum mujhe
ab karo na ruswa aao mere ban jao na...!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2010, 07:13:09 AM »
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Riyaz Saheb! Ye andaaz to bas Ms Kasak Dik Ki (Ms Anamika Saheha) ne paida karwa diya. Unki aik tehreer paRhi aur hum apne ko rok nahiN paaye. Aapne jis andaaz se is ghazal ki tareef ki hai uske liye aapka shukriya ada karta hooN.

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Quote from: riyaz106 on July 16, 2010, 12:49:14 PM
Wah bahot hi khoob kaha hai Waqif sahab. Aapka ye andaaz pahli baar dekhne ko mila. Bahot hi umda ghazal nawaza hai is me mehfil ko. Afreen sad afreen.

Mujhko dar lagta hai andhere se
Jald koi diyaa jalaao na


 
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2010, 07:14:56 AM »
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Janab klaskar Ji! Adab!
Ye sab Ms Anamika Sahe ki mehrbaani hai jinhoNne aisa likhwa diya. Aapki muhabbatoN ka shukriya janab.

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Quote from: klaskar on July 16, 2010, 02:04:47 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Waqif ji... aur Kasak ji aapke jawaab ka bhi jawaab nahi...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2010, 07:16:14 AM »
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Janab Anshumali Saheb. Aapki muhabbat aur nawazisoN ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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Quote from: Anshumali on July 17, 2010, 04:55:03 AM
Very Impressive creation.....ansari sahab ! dil se daad !
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«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2010, 07:29:46 AM »
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Janab Dr. Pandey Saheb! Adab!
Jaisa ke maiN upar arz kiya hai ke is ghazal ke peechhe Ms Anamika Saheba ki tehreereN haiN. Jinki tehreeroN ko paRhkar maiN khud ko nahiN rok paaya aur ye ghazal kahni paRi. Aapke dono sher khoob hi nahiN bahut khoob haiN. Isi tarah apni muhabbatoN se nawaazte rahiye. Main to ye kahta hooN:

Dil hi jab unke paas hai apna
Kya chhupaaooN tumheeN bataao na

HaaN ! "Adab" se yahi guzaarish hai
Phone par sher gungunaao na

(Waquif Ansari)

Quote from: drpandey on July 17, 2010, 08:04:09 PM
Waah ! WAQUIF Sahab aapka ye sadghi aur shararat ka naya andaaz behad khoobsurat laga... Hazaron daad hazir karta hun kabool farmayen.

Jinko chaha ho toot kar tumne
Raaz-e-dil unse ab chhupao na

Fir mulaqaat ho 'Adab' apni
Aisa ek silsila chalao na..
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