aabaad hu main,barbaad hu main

by Prateek Mardia on January 10, 2009, 09:12:03 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 14, 2009, 05:11:34 PM »
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wah prateek kya khoob likha hai aap neh. bahut hi badiya

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«Reply #16 on: January 14, 2009, 05:12:23 PM »
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wah khwaish aap neh bhi kya khooob likha hai. very nice.

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«Reply #17 on: January 15, 2009, 03:07:59 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 14, 2009, 04:25:00 PM
Wah wah Prateek Mardia ji bahut khoob  Applause

Saraahna ka shukrguzaar Roja ji.
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«Reply #18 on: January 15, 2009, 03:08:48 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 14, 2009, 05:11:34 PM
wah prateek kya khoob likha hai aap neh. bahut hi badiya

Jasbir Singh

Aapka aabhar ,apne is kavita ki taaref ki.
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«Reply #19 on: January 15, 2009, 06:35:01 AM »
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Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on January 13, 2009, 08:40:05 PM
...good one Prateek and you rock Khwaish...keep it up...

Thanx A Lot Bro...


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wah wah wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji and Khwaish ji, app dono ne he kamaal ka likha hai... bahoot khoob!!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..Aap bhi Kuch Likhte To Chaar Chand Lag Jaate..


Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 14, 2009, 03:18:05 PM
Aapke yahan likhne se yeh panna bhee khoobsurat bun gaya,khwaish bhai.bahut khoob.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Prateekji,Aapne Itni Izzat Bakhsi,Teh Dil Se Shukar-Guzaar Hoon..


Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 14, 2009, 05:12:23 PM
wah khwaish aap neh bhi kya khooob likha hai. very nice.

jasbir singh

Thankyou So Much Jasbir Paaji...
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«Reply #20 on: January 16, 2009, 11:58:04 PM »
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Bohat khoob Prateeek and Khwaish ji..  Applause

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«Reply #21 on: January 21, 2009, 07:25:16 PM »
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on January 16, 2009, 11:58:04 PM
Bohat khoob Prateeek and Khwaish ji..  Applause

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taareef ke liye shukriya sajid hadayat ji.
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«Reply #22 on: January 21, 2009, 08:03:27 PM »
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Bahut achha likha hai Prateek...
"Kabhi kuchh bhooli bisri daastaan hu main...
Kabhi kuchh yaadon ka makaan hu main..." Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nahi jaanta kis mukaam pe hu main
Rah kaunsi hai kahan ja raha hu main
Khud se bhi jaise anjaan hu ab main
Tum he kaho aabaad hu ya barbaad hu main

Man-Mastishk me vivad kyon
Kismat se bhi fariyaad kyon
Mila jo pal g bhar gyo n kyon
Gava diya jo uski ab yaad kyon

Kabhi khawaish hui haasil
Kabhi chhalavo ne toda dil
N ho hatash mil jayegi manzil
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 10, 2009, 09:12:03 PM

Kabhi  khud se he aabaad hu main
Kabhi  khud se he barbaad hu main
Kuch khwaishey haasil hui pur
Armaano ki taadad hu main.!


Kabhi dil ki baatein ansuni ki
Kabhi dimaag ko kiya kinaara
Jaddozehad ke bane pulindey
Mun-mastishk ka vivaad hu main!


Kabhi kuch bhooli bisri daastaan hu main
Kabhi kuch yaadon ka makaan hu main
Yeh silsiley thumtey nahi hai
Kuch dardon ki buniyaad hu main !


 Kabhi waqt aur kismat se  ki ladaai
Kabhi jholi mein aayi khushiyaa bhee gavaai
Zindgi ke chalaavey dekhe saare
Ub maut ki fariyaad hu main.!


Kabhi khud se he aabaad hu main
Kabhi khud se he barbaad hu main!
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«Reply #23 on: January 21, 2009, 08:05:03 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 10, 2009, 09:12:03 PM

Kabhi  khud se he aabaad hu main
Kabhi  khud se he barbaad hu main
Kuch khwaishey haasil hui pur
Armaano ki taadad hu main.!


Kabhi dil ki baatein ansuni ki
Kabhi dimaag ko kiya kinaara
Jaddozehad ke bane pulindey
Mun-mastishk ka vivaad hu main!


Kabhi kuch bhooli bisri daastaan hu main
Kabhi kuch yaadon ka makaan hu main
Yeh silsiley thumtey nahi hai
Kuch dardon ki buniyaad hu main !


 Kabhi waqt aur kismat se  ki ladaai
Kabhi jholi mein aayi khushiyaa bhee gavaai
Zindgi ke chalaavey dekhe saare
Ub maut ki fariyaad hu main.!


Kabhi khud se he aabaad hu main
Kabhi khud se he barbaad hu main!




wah janab lanat hai humari aankhon ko jo is behtreen kalam se itne dino mahroom rahi bahoot achcha likha hai prateek ji...
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«Reply #24 on: January 21, 2009, 08:14:43 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 21, 2009, 08:03:27 PM
Bahut achha likha hai Prateek...
"Kabhi kuchh bhooli bisri daastaan hu main...
Kabhi kuchh yaadon ka makaan hu main..." Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nahi jaanta kis mukaam pe hu main
Rah kaunsi hai kahan ja raha hu main
Khud se bhi jaise anjaan hu ab main
Tum he kaho aabaad hu ya barbaad hu main

Man-Mastishk me vivad kyon
Kismat se bhi fariyaad kyon
Mila jo pal g bhar gyo n kyon
Gava diya jo uski ab yaad kyon

Kabhi khawaish hui haasil
Kabhi chhalavo ne toda dil
N ho hatash mil jayegi manzil
Bus tu shayari ki mehfil me khil  icon_flower

hausla afzaahi ka tahe dil se shukrguzaar. Aapse jo jo sikha hai kabhi kabhi himmat juta kar likh leta hu bus.Aapki duaon ka sandesh to sada hi saath rehta hai!
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«Reply #25 on: January 21, 2009, 08:18:39 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 21, 2009, 08:05:03 PM
wah janab lanat hai humari aankhon ko jo is behtreen kalam se itne dino mahroom rahi bahoot achcha likha hai prateek ji...


Aap bahri mehfil mein to sharminda mut kara kijiye bekarar bhai.aisa kuch nahi hota meri kalam mein,aapke pukhta shero se seekh seekh kar hi tukbandiyaa ki hai aaj tuk.
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«Reply #26 on: January 21, 2009, 08:24:51 PM »
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Prateek,

Behtareen kalam ! Applause Applause Applause

Too good !

Nice replies by other friends too ! Applause
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«Reply #27 on: January 31, 2009, 07:12:05 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 14, 2009, 03:23:07 PM
shukriya Pooja ji, khwaish ji to sada hi kamaal ka likhte hai,unhi se seekh seekha kar kabhi kabhi cheshta kar leta hu mai bhee..

Prateekji,aapne yeh baat kehkar mujhe sharminda kar diya..
sach to yeh hai ke maine khud aapse bahut kuch seekha hai..
Prateekji..main hamesha yehi aasha karta hoon ki aage bhi,mujhe aapka yuhi saath milta rahega..aur main aapse kuch sikhta rahunga..
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«Reply #28 on: February 01, 2009, 04:00:01 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on January 21, 2009, 08:24:51 PM
Prateek,

Behtareen kalam ! Applause Applause Applause

Too good !

Nice replies by other friends too ! Applause

aapko pasand aaya,jaankar prassanta hui.saraahna ke liye shukriya.
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«Reply #29 on: February 01, 2009, 04:01:57 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 22, 2009, 05:24:05 AM
Wah Wah  Kya Andaaz.e.Bayaan Hai Aapka
Bohat Hi Khoob Prateek Sahab..Keep It Up.

dhnyawaad shihab ji ,aapki taareef mil gayi,accha laga.
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