Aaiina jaise hamko pahchanta nahin.... manjum

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Aaye jo uske samne to esa kuch laga.
Aaiina jaise hamko pahchanta nahin.

Mushkil safar tha fir bhi chal pade the ham,
Ab kya karen ye dil hai ki manta nahin.

Uske hi ird-gird guzari hai ye zindgi,
Fir bhi ye kah raha hai hamen janta nahin.

Bigda hua koi bachcha ye apna mann raha,
Samjhate rahe isko magar manta nahin.

Abke na karega koi galti ye kasam se,
Kahta hai har ek bar magar thhanta nahin.

Manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2011, 05:06:48 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut khoob Manju! khas tour par last one!

kahtaa hai har ik baar magar thaantaa nahee...

dil to bachchaa hai jee......
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2011, 05:09:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mamtaji..... aapki daad bahut khas hai hamare lie..... aap jaise ache shayaro ki daad milna khushnasibi hai.....

yun hi sath rahie.....
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2011, 05:16:26 AM »
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boht kuch bol diya apne realy very gud
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2011, 05:17:42 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saahilji.... bas dil ki baat hai ji.....

sath rahie....
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2011, 09:04:59 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Anju Ji..

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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2011, 09:21:28 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on May 28, 2011, 04:59:33 AM
Aaye jo uske samne to esa kuch laga.
Aaiina jaise hamko pahchanta nahin.

Mushkil safar tha fir bhi chal pade the ham,
Ab kya karen ye dil hai ki manta nahin.

Uske hi ird-gird guzari hai ye zindgi,
Fir bhi ye kah raha hai hamen janta nahin.

Bigda hua koi bachcha ye apna mann raha,
Samjhate rahe isko magar manta nahin.

Abke na karega koi galti ye kasam se,
Kahta hai har ek bar magar thhanta nahin.

Manju "mann"



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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2011, 10:28:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji.....

yun hi sath rahie...
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2011, 10:37:05 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....

yun hi sath rahiega......
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2011, 10:38:50 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji.....

yun hi sath dete rahiega........
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2011, 10:41:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihabji.... aapne pasand kia isle lie shukriya aapka....

aapka sath bana rahe
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2011, 06:37:17 AM »
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gud…lekin incomplete hai ye nagma…
complete kariye…

aaine se kab thi jan-pehchaan apni
woh to surat e haal batlata hai……

zor dekar jo puchu kabhi
bechara tootkar hi  bikhar jaata ha………
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2011, 03:37:14 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sarfiraji....

shayad incomplete hi hai par dil islke aage kuchh likh nai paya aur zabaran to likha bekar tha so chhod dia yese hi...


shukriya aapka sujhao sar aankho par koshish krenege ki pura kia ja sake...
aapne bahut khubsurat likha hai....

sath rahiye...
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«Reply #14 on: June 05, 2011, 06:07:08 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on May 30, 2011, 03:37:14 AM
bahut bahut shukriya sarfiraji....

shayad incomplete hi hai par dil islke aage kuchh likh nai paya aur zabaran to likha bekar tha so chhod dia yese hi...


shukriya aapka sujhao sar aankho par koshish krenege ki pura kia ja sake...
aapne bahut khubsurat likha hai....

sath rahiye...
aapki marji  jab dil karn pura kariye ya rahne dije…
hamara sar fira hua h…
kuch b kah deta hu…
bura na maniyega
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