Aaj ghar se nikale hain... By tuhina

by Tuhina on June 09, 2013, 06:56:35 PM
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Aaj vo chupchaap ghar se nikale hain,
bade bezaar  hoke  nikale  hain.

Kaha tha! itana kisi me doob jana theek nai hai..
Kya khoob the kya khaak hoke nikale   hain...

Yunhi ni hai shauk unhe ainak lagane ka,
asal me raat bhar bistar se ro ke nikale  hain.....

Har aahat se ab unhe dar lagata hai,...
chura liya hai kuch ya khud hi kho ke nikale hain....

Manzil pe aaj lagata hai, der se pahunchege....
Koi tasweer ghar se saath leke nikale hain.... 

Kahin hans na dena galti se,
unki halat pe badi muddat ke baad aaj ghar se  nikale   hain....

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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2013, 07:50:59 PM »
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Aaj   vo   chupchaap  ghar  se  nikale  hain,  bade   bezaar  hoke  nikale  hain..                                                                                              Kaha  tha !  itana   kisi  me  doob  jana  theek  ni   hai....  Kya   khoob  the   kya   khaak   hoke   nikale   hain...                                                                                 Yunhi  ni  hai   shauk  unhe  ainak lagane  ka,   asal   me  raat  bhar bistar  se  ro  ke  nikale  hain.....                                                                    Har  aahat  se  ab  unhe  dar lagata  hai,.....chura  liya  hai  kuch ya  khud   hi  kho  ke  nikale  hain                                                                Manzil  pe  aaj  lagata  hai , der  se  pahunchege....Koi  tasweer ghar  se   saath   leke   nikale  hain....                                                                    Kahin   hans  na  dena  galti   se,    unki   halat  pe   badi   muddat   ke   baad   aaj  ghar   se  nikale   hain....
Bahut Khoob Likha Aapne,Mam!
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2013, 08:04:03 PM »
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nyc thoughts,...........
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 10:24:01 PM »
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Aaj vo chupchaap ghar se nikale hain,
bade bezaar  hoke  nikale  hain.

Kaha tha! itana kisi me doob jana theek nai hai..
Kya khoob the kya khaak hoke nikale   hain...

Yunhi ni hai shauk unhe ainak lagane ka,
asal me raat bhar bistar se ro ke nikale  hain.....

Har aahat se ab unhe dar lagata hai,...
chura liya hai kuch ya khud hi kho ke nikale hain....

Manzil pe aaj lagata hai, der se pahunchege....
Koi tasweer ghar se saath leke nikale hain....  

Kahin hans na dena galti se,
unki halat pe badi muddat ke baad aaj ghar se  nikale   hain....


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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2013, 11:59:34 PM »
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Waah behad khoobsurat ehsaas aur khayaal hain ... Daad is rachna par Tuhina ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2013, 01:06:10 PM »
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bahut khoob Tuhina ji .  Touhid sahib ne align kar ke
ghazal padhne walon ke liye aasaan kar di. Bahut achha ,
khubsurat kalam hai,mubarak ho.
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2013, 12:17:40 AM »
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very happy sister.
tremendous improvement.. replica of your hard work.
keep it up.
best of luck my dear
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