Aakarshan.....

by SURESH SANGWAN on March 28, 2010, 01:19:24 PM
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Ek mazdoor ko dekhkar achhanak muh se nikaltaa hai.

Jise dekh kar khinch jataa insaan hai.
wah roop nahin hota ,hoti muskaan hai.

shool liye dil mein jo raha nihaartaa.
weh shool nahin hota hota dil ka armaan hai.

Jise dekhkar jhuk jaata insaan hai.
weh insaan nahin hota hota uskaa ehsaan hai.

Pathik bhool kar path ko jab pehchaanta.
weh pathik nahin hota hoti path ki pehchhan hai.

pattharon ko tod banaata raah jo.
weh mazdoor nahin hota weh to dharti ka mehmaan hai.

Om Prakash Chauhaan.
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 01:25:03 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sureshji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2010, 01:28:14 PM »
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shukriya khwaishji .ye kavita mere guruji om prakash chauhaan ji ki hai.
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sureshji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2010, 01:38:32 PM »
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Bahut Achi kavita Likhi Hai Om prakshji Ne..

Mujhe Khaas Kar yeh Sher bahut pasand aaya..

"Jisse Dekhkar Jhuk Jaata Insaan Hai
Woh Insaan Nahi Hota,Hota Uska Ehsaan Hai" Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Hi gehri Baat Kahi Hai Om Prakshji Ne..

Thanks A Lotttttttttttttttt For Sharing Sureshji icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2010, 01:41:12 PM »
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SHUKRIYA KHWAISHJI.
Wo hain hi aise shaksh ki unko dekh kar jeevan ki soch hi badal sakti hai.
Quote from: khwaish on March 28, 2010, 01:38:32 PM
Bahut Achi kavita Likhi Hai Om prakshji Ne..

Mujhe Khaas Kar yeh Sher bahut pasand aaya..

"Jisse Dekhkar Jhuk Jaate Hai Insaan Hai
Woh insaan Nahi Hota,Hota Uska Ehsaan Hai" Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Hi gehri Baat Kahi Hai Om Prakshji Ne..

Thanks A Lotttttttttttttttt For Sharing Sureshji icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2010, 04:51:12 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 28, 2010, 01:19:24 PM
Ek mazdoor ko dekhkar achhanak muh se nikaltaa hai.

Jise dekh kar khinch jataa insaan hai.
wah roop nahin hota ,hoti muskaan hai.

shool liye dil mein jo raha nihaartaa.
weh shool nahin hota hota dil ka armaan hai.

Jise dekhkar jhuk jaata insaan hai.
weh insaan nahin hota hota uskaa ehsaan hai.

Pathik bhool kar path ko jab pehchaanta.
weh pathik nahin hota hoti path ki pehchhan hai.

pattharon ko tod banaata raah jo.
weh mazdoor nahin hota weh to dharti ka mehmaan hai.

Om Prakash Chauhaan.
Behtareen kriti hai Suresh Ji, Manav man ki samvednaon ko bahut achchhe dhang se shabdon ka aakar diya hai aapne...
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2010, 05:39:34 PM »
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SHUKRIYA DR PANDEYJI.
YE MERE GURUJI KI HAI.
Quote from: drpandey on March 28, 2010, 04:51:12 PM
Behtareen kriti hai Suresh Ji, Manav man ki samvednaon ko bahut achchhe dhang se shabdon ka aakar diya hai aapne...
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2010, 05:47:38 PM »
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SHUKRIYA DR PANDEYJI.
YE MERE GURUJI KI HAI.
Aapke Guruji ko mera Sat Sat Naman hai...
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2010, 04:24:56 AM »
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kya baat hai
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2010, 12:46:17 PM »
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shukriya drpandeyji.
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Aapke Guruji ko mera Sat Sat Naman hai...
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2010, 12:46:47 PM »
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thanks anjaan ji.
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kya baat hai
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2010, 07:25:22 AM »
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Thanks Suresh Ji for sharing a good poem. This is very nice creation of Mr. OP Chauhan.
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2010, 11:13:05 AM »
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Yes riyaz ji also think so. thanks a lot.
Quote from: riyaz106 on March 30, 2010, 07:25:22 AM
Thanks Suresh Ji for sharing a good poem. This is very nice creation of Mr. OP Chauhan.
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