Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish":Shairi - E

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Pichle 6 Dino se Hyderabad Shehar Mein, Ek Ajeeb sa Maahol Bana Hai..Curfew ke Kaaran Logon Ke Roz-Aana Zindagi mein Bahut Si Mushkile Aayi hai..yeh dekh kar Dil Bahut Dukhta Hai ke Aaj Bhi Log Jaane Kaise Unn Baaton,unn Maslon ke Liye Apna Waqt Nikaal Lete Hai,jisse Sabko Nuksaan Ho Chaahe Woh kisi Bhi Mazhab Aur Dharam Ka Ho,Kuch Aisi Baatein,Kuch Zindagi se Juudi Baatein..Aur ek jagah Par Bacho Ki Baat Ki hai,Jahan Aaj Bache Choti si umar mein Aapas mein yeh Baat Karte Hai ke Kaun Se Mazhab ke Log Sahi Hai Aur kaun Galat..Yeh Sab Dekh kar Dil Dukhta Hai Ke Aaj Hum Bacho Ke Yeh Kaunsa Kal De Rahe Hai...Khuda Kare Ke Hum sab Mil-Jhul Kar Humesha Rahe...Shukriya

Jalte Hue Registaan Puchte Hai
Saawan Kaisa Hota Hai
Jin Bacho Ko Ghar Naseeb nahi Hote,Woh Puchte Hai
Ghar Ka Aangan Kaisa Hota Hai...

Humne Dekhe Hai Aise Bhi Shaks Jinhone Apni Zindagi
Beeta Di Do Roti kamaane mein!!
Kabhi Fursat Ki Ghadi mein Woh Puchte Hai
Ke Aakhir Youvan Kaisa Hota Hai...

Aaj ke Daur mein Zindagi Jeena Hi Bahut Mushkil Hai
Aur yehi Hai Aaj Ke Daur Ki haqeeqat!!!
Hum jaankar Kya Karenge Ke,
Khwaabo ka Darpan Kaisa Hota Hai...

Humne Dekhe Hai Aise Bhi Log
Jinhe Auron ki Jaan ki Koi Parwaah Nahi!!!
Ab Hum Nahi Jaana Chaahte Ke
Raavan Kaisa Hota hai....

Kuch Rishte Bas Yuhi juud Jaate Hai
Sirf Aitbaar Ke Dam Par!!!
Hum Samajhte Hai Ke,
Rishte-Naato Ka Bandhan Kaisa Hota Hai....

Aaj Ke Tez Daur Mein,
Bache Bhi Badon Jaisi Baatein Karte Hai!!!!!
Aane Wale Kal Mein Log Ek Duje Se Puchenge,
Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota Hai....

Main Hairaan Hoon,Iss Zameen Par Aaj Bhi,
Log Ladhte Hai Sirf Dharam-Mazhab ke Naam Par!!!
"Khwaish" Insaano Ki Iss Zameen Par Insaano Wali Baat Nahi,
Pata Nahi Unn Panchiyon ka Ambar Kaisa Hota Hai....

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2010, 10:42:01 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on April 03, 2010, 10:32:42 AM

bahut khoob Khwaish dear,bahut acha likha hai aapne aur apne andaaz se thoda alag try kia hai aur sarvdharm sambhav ki prerna di hai aapne,bahut khoob dost Applause

kuch arz kar rahe hain zara zeregaur chahunga

aaj ke daur me kya kya ho raha hai
aaj ke daur ko doston kya ho raha hai

koi dukhi hai koi dukhi kar raha
koi sukhi sirf doosre ka dukh dekhke ho raha

aaj ke daur ko doston kya ho raha hai

dharm jaati me baantke logon ko neta rotiyan senkte hain
jaativaad chhetriyavad itna ki vote dene ke pehle hum yehi sochte hain

samaaj samaajik maanyaton kureetiyun se tang hai
hum samajhte nahi kuch kah dete sarkaar me laga zang hai

ma-baap ki koi baat bachhe maante nahi
kitne to bade hoke ma-baap ko ma-baap mante nahi
kitne ma-baap hain jo bachhon ko itna sikhate hain
buzurgon ki izzat ko sabse pehle sikhate hain

jinhe aise sanskaar milte hain vohi to khushnaseeb hote hain
vohi samaaj ki kureeti khatm karte vohi sayyam barat.te hain

varna to insaan bada hoke bhi insaniyat nahi samajh pata
zaat-paat oonch neech se uska man dukhi dukhi sa rahta

aaj zarurat hai hume aise iraadon aise vichaaron ki
sabhi dharm sikhate insaniyat ye vani hai Rab ki

varna to Babri masjid Ramjanmbhumi par hum kat.te marte rahenge
Allah-o-Eeshwar ek hai jo nahi samjhenge
aise dangon se insaniyat ke saath uparwala bhi dukhi hota hai
jab aadmi apas me ladke aadmi ke khoon se apna haath laal karta hai

Sabse pehle, To Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji Jo Aapne Iss Rachna Ko Padha,Samjha Aur Dil Se Saraha..Thankyou Sooooooo Much!!!!

Aur Kaashji Aapne Bhi Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha..Har Lafz Mein Sachai nazar Aayi hai..Bahut Bahut Ache..


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2010, 10:45:13 AM »

Tooooo good..Har baar kuch naya seekha jate ho ap apni kalam se...bahaut khoob... Applause

Rahim bhi yeh tamanaa rakta hai 'Khwahish',
Kash ek din tuj jaise likh sakoun...


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2010, 10:45:44 AM »

Bahaut khoob Kaash jee..


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2010, 11:05:36 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 03, 2010, 10:45:13 AM

Tooooo good..Har baar kuch naya seekha jate ho ap apni kalam se...bahaut khoob... Applause

Rahim bhi yeh tamanaa rakta hai 'Khwahish',
Kash ek din tuj jaise likh sakoun...

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim....

Aur Bhai Rahim,Aap Bahut Hi Acha Likhte Ho,Aur Ussse Bhi badi Baat Yeh Hai ke Aapko iss Baat Par Bilkul Bhi Gamand Nahi..Yeh Bahut Badi Baat hai..

Ek shayar Ki Zindagi Ko Lekar Kuch Arz Kar raha Hoon..

kahi Par Ghazal, Kahi Par Nazm To kahi Par
Kahani Ban kar Jee Lenge Iss Zamaane Mein...
Log Kabhi Nahi Bhool Paate Ek Shayar Ko,
Sadiyan Beet jaati Hai Kisi Shayari Ko Bhoolane Mein


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2010, 11:24:22 AM »

bhot khub khawish ji mind blowing


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2010, 12:55:45 PM »

Quote from: rayees abdullah on April 03, 2010, 11:24:22 AM

bhot khub khawish ji mind blowing

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rayees Bhai..


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2010, 01:37:01 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on April 03, 2010, 01:17:57 PM

Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhia
Humesha Ki Tarah Ik Nahi Soch
Ik Naya Andaaz...

Bahut Umda Peshkas Hai

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Teh Dil Se Shukriya Majid Bhai..

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2010, 03:28:44 PM »

Bahut hi khoob khwaish ji......daad dete hai aapki soch aur aapki kalam ki.....
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Bahut hi vadhiya kaash ji.......poora saath diya aapne khwaish ji ka.....
daad kabul kariye....... Clapping Smiley


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2010, 04:16:03 PM »

Wah wah Khwaish ji bahut asardaar dhang se aur gehraai ke saath aapne ye kavita likhi hai. Sach hi hai dangon se kabhi kisi ka bhala nahin hua aur na hoga. Bahut dange kar liya, dekh liye, bhugat liye ab to ae insaan maan ja, naahaq kisi ka khoon baha kar us MAALIK ko kyon naraaz karta hai jisne hum sab ko banaaya. Itna khoon baha kar kya ab bhi ye saabit nahi hua ke sabka khoon laal hota hai.

Kaash ji ne bahut achha likha hai. Aapne bhi dango ke dard ko bahkhubi bayaan kiya hai.


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2010, 09:46:41 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on April 03, 2010, 11:05:36 AM

Teh dil se shukriya...Gamand insaan ko karna bhi nahin chahiye...Tariff uss Allah ki jo sabse takatwar hai..Hum insaan kya aukad aur kya pehchan...

Bahaut khoob kaha hai inn lines main apne...


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2010, 10:29:24 PM »

Bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Khwaish ji. Bahut hi asaan aur khoobsurat shabdo me aapne aaj k waqt ko pesh kiya hai. Sach me zindagi ki is daud me hum kai saari chhoti chhoti cheezon ko andekha kar dete hain aur bas bhaagte rehte hain. Bas bhaagte rehte hain. Hume pata hi nahi rehta hamare aas paas kya ho raha hai. koi lad raha hai, koi mar raha hai, humein usse kya lena. yahi soch hai aaj k pidi ki. Tabhi ye mahasangraam khatam nahi ho raha. Aur shayad hoga bhi nahi. Sirf dharm k nama pe hi nahi yahaan to bhai bhai k jaan ka dushman bana hua hai, beta baap ko maar raha hai .. aur bhi najane kya kya .... sirf wahi samajh sakta hai in sabko jispe bitti hai... bahut khoobsurti se aapne is haqeekat ko apni kavita me daala hai... bahut khoob Khwaish ji... bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley

zindagi jo aaj hai bahut khoobsurat hai,
agar yunhi chalta raha jo chal raha hai,
to kal koi poochhega ki zindagi kaisi hoti hai,
jawab me kahega koi maut se badtar hoti hai...


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2010, 11:31:03 PM »

Its TOoooooooooo Gud !!!!!!!!!!
C im sitting in States( USA) Still i can easily connect wid u & can feel It ....
Ur words r so REAL........
Gud work!!!!!!!!!!!1

Quote from: khwaish on April 03, 2010, 10:16:54 AM


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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2010, 12:19:39 AM »

Bahut dhuk hua Padke Khwaish ji.bechare baccho par kitna bura asar hota hoga. .very sad.ek chotti si prayer hai meri taraf se Hyderabad ke liye .sabko mil ke prayer karna chaiye.sab kuch zaroor teek hoga. sad7

Almighty God we dedicate hyderabad to the honor and service and ask you to make it the abode of light,love,purity and peace.Let all that is pure ,tender grow in dat country,and all that hinders Godly union and concord be driven far from it.father with faith i ask you to watch over the people of hyderabad and direct there footsteps in the way of truth.And let the beauty of the lord our God be
upon the children of that land.we thank you and praise your name.Amen.


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Re: Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2010, 07:50:24 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on April 03, 2010, 01:39:33 PM

Welcome Khwaish Bhai
Aur Aap Likhte Hi Itna Achcha Hai Ki
Hum Apne Aap Khinche Chale Aate Hain Bhai
Har Baar Bahut Kuch Sikhne Ko Milta Hai Aapse

Khair...

Bas Yun Hi Likhte Rahiye

Aur Mehfil Ko Rohan Karte Rahiye...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Majid Bhai..Hum Sab Ek Duje Ki Poetries Se Kuch na Kuch Seekhte Hi Rehte Hai..Aapne apna waqt diya..wahi bahut hai..Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much!!!!


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