Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: April 08, 2010, 12:44:33 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on April 03, 2010, 03:28:44 PM
Bahut hi khoob khwaish ji......daad dete hai aapki soch aur aapki kalam ki.....
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Bahut hi vadhiya kaash ji.......poora saath diya aapne khwaish ji ka.....
daad kabul kariye....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #16 on: April 12, 2010, 01:12:22 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 03, 2010, 04:16:03 PM
Wah wah Khwaish ji bahut asardaar dhang se aur gehraai ke saath aapne ye kavita likhi hai. Sach hi hai dangon se kabhi kisi ka bhala nahin hua aur na hoga. Bahut dange kar liya, dekh liye, bhugat liye ab to ae insaan maan ja, naahaq kisi ka khoon baha kar us MAALIK ko kyon naraaz karta hai jisne hum sab ko banaaya. Itna khoon baha kar kya ab bhi ye saabit nahi hua ke sabka khoon laal hota hai.

Kaash ji ne bahut achha likha hai. Aapne bhi dango ke dard ko bahkhubi bayaan kiya hai.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Riyaz Ji Jo Aapne Iss Kavita Ke Dard Ko samjha,Aur Aapne Bhi Bahut Gehri Baatein Ki hai..Agar Insaan yeh Sab Samjhe tO Yakeenan kahi Bhi Koi Dange-Fasaad Hi na Ho..

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«Reply #17 on: April 13, 2010, 04:22:21 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 03, 2010, 09:46:41 PM
Teh dil se shukriya...Gamand insaan ko karna bhi nahin chahiye...Tariff uss Allah ki jo sabse takatwar hai..Hum insaan kya aukad aur kya pehchan...

Bahaut khoob kaha hai inn lines main apne...

Aapki Soch Ko Mera Salaam Bhai Rahim!!! icon_salut

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«Reply #18 on: April 13, 2010, 05:56:12 PM »
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jindagi ko mahsoos karna koi aapse sikhe bhai......aur dil ko choona aapki ghazlon se.....aapki ghazal ko aapki soch ko mera salam....great job bro.
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«Reply #19 on: April 13, 2010, 07:02:03 PM »
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Jadeed kaifiat se labrez kalaam likha hai aapne khwaish ji..dil ko chho gaya..hazaron daad nazar karta hun..
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«Reply #20 on: April 14, 2010, 10:00:07 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 03, 2010, 10:29:24 PM
Bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Khwaish ji. Bahut hi asaan aur khoobsurat shabdo me aapne aaj k waqt ko pesh kiya hai. Sach me zindagi ki is daud me hum kai saari chhoti chhoti cheezon ko andekha kar dete hain aur bas bhaagte rehte hain. Bas bhaagte rehte hain. Hume pata hi nahi rehta hamare aas paas kya ho raha hai. koi lad raha hai, koi mar raha hai, humein usse kya lena. yahi soch hai aaj k pidi ki. Tabhi ye mahasangraam khatam nahi ho raha. Aur shayad hoga bhi nahi. Sirf dharm k nama pe hi nahi yahaan to bhai bhai k jaan ka dushman bana hua hai, beta baap ko maar raha hai .. aur bhi najane kya kya .... sirf wahi samajh sakta hai in sabko jispe bitti hai... bahut khoobsurti se aapne is haqeekat ko apni kavita me daala hai... bahut khoob Khwaish ji... bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

zindagi jo aaj hai bahut khoobsurat hai,
agar yunhi chalta raha jo chal raha hai,
to kal koi poochhega ki zindagi kaisi hoti hai,
jawab me kahega koi maut se badtar hoti hai...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Klaskar ji..

Aur Aapne Bhi bahut Ache Khyalaat pesh Kiye Hai..Yeh Sach hai Ke Aaj Ka Yeh Daur Jis Raah Par chal raha Hai,Uss Hisaab se Aage Kisi Ki Jaan Ki bhi Koi keemat Nahi Hogi..

Aapne bahut Acha Likha Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: April 14, 2010, 10:09:47 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob khwaishji.hamesha ki tarhaa bahut achha likha hai

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«Reply #22 on: April 14, 2010, 11:00:44 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 03, 2010, 10:16:54 AM
Pichle 6 Dino se Hyderabad Shehar Mein, Ek Ajeeb sa Maahol Bana Hai..Curfew ke Kaaran Logon Ke Roz-Aana Zindagi mein Bahut Si Mushkile Aayi hai..yeh dekh kar Dil Bahut Dukhta Hai ke Aaj Bhi Log Jaane Kaise Unn Baaton,unn Maslon ke Liye Apna Waqt Nikaal Lete Hai,jisse Sabko Nuksaan Ho Chaahe Woh kisi Bhi Mazhab Aur Dharam Ka Ho,Kuch Aisi Baatein,Kuch Zindagi se Juudi Baatein..Aur ek jagah Par Bacho Ki Baat Ki hai,Jahan Aaj Bache Choti si umar mein Aapas mein yeh Baat Karte Hai ke Kaun Se Mazhab ke Log Sahi Hai Aur kaun Galat..Yeh Sab Dekh kar Dil Dukhta Hai Ke Aaj Hum Bacho Ke Yeh Kaunsa Kal De Rahe Hai...Khuda Kare Ke Hum sab Mil-Jhul Kar Humesha Rahe...Shukriya



Jalte Hue Registaan Puchte Hai
Saawan Kaisa Hota Hai
Jin Bacho Ko Ghar Naseeb nahi Hote,Woh Puchte Hai
Ghar Ka Aangan Kaisa Hota Hai...

Humne Dekhe Hai Aise Bhi Shaks Jinhone Apni Zindagi
Beeta Di Do Roti kamaane mein!!
Kabhi Fursat Ki Ghadi mein Woh Puchte Hai
Ke Aakhir Youvan Kaisa Hota Hai...

Aaj ke Daur mein Zindagi Jeena Hi Bahut Mushkil Hai
Aur yehi Hai Aaj Ke Daur Ki haqeeqat!!!
Hum jaankar Kya Karenge Ke,
Khwaabo ka Darpan Kaisa Hota Hai...

Humne Dekhe Hai Aise Bhi Log
Jinhe Auron ki Jaan ki Koi Parwaah Nahi!!!
Ab Hum Nahi Jaana Chaahte Ke
Raavan Kaisa Hota hai....

Kuch Rishte Bas Yuhi juud Jaate Hai
Sirf Aitbaar Ke Dam Par!!!
Hum Samajhte Hai Ke,
Rishte-Naato Ka Bandhan Kaisa Hota Hai....

Aaj Ke Tez Daur Mein,
Bache Bhi Badon Jaisi Baatein Karte Hai!!!!!
Aane Wale Kal Mein Log Ek Duje Se Puchenge,
Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota Hai....

Main Hairaan Hoon,Iss Zameen Par Aaj Bhi,
Log Ladhte Hai Sirf Dharam-Mazhab ke Naam Par!!!
"Khwaish" Insaano Ki Iss Zameen Par Insaano Wali Baat Nahi,
Pata Nahi Unn Panchiyon ka Ambar Kaisa Hota Hai....

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Pehli hi line dil main ek gehra asar daal gayi...aur sochne ko majboor karti aapki ye nazm bohot behtareen peshkash hai...Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish Dost ek baar phir se ek talakh magar sachchi baat kehne ke liye  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: April 14, 2010, 11:10:15 AM »
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Wah bahoth qoob .. Khawish sahab .. Dad qubool karen ..khuch kahene ko mann karta hai kaafi mutasir kiya hai taherir ne .. do misre jo ke issi pasmanzar me kahe hain .. umid hai pasand aye apko ..


Ajeeb is shaher ki surath a haal hai !!
marna bada aasan jeena muhal hai !!


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«Reply #24 on: April 16, 2010, 03:16:37 AM »
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Main Hairaan Hoon,Iss Zameen Par Aaj Bhi,
Log Ladhte Hai Sirf Dharam-Mazhab ke Naam Par!!!
"Khwaish" Insaano Ki Iss Zameen Par Insaano Wali Baat Nahi,
Pata Nahi Unn Panchiyon ka Ambar Kaisa Hota Hai....

Wah... Wah.. Khwaish Ji... Subhan Allah... Subhan Allah...
Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Aapka... Daad Kubool Kijiye...
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«Reply #25 on: April 16, 2010, 08:24:55 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 05, 2010, 11:31:03 PM
Its TOoooooooooo Gud !!!!!!!!!!
 C im sitting in States( USA) Still i can easily connect wid u & can feel It ....
Ur words r so REAL........
Gud work!!!!!!!!!!!1 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks A Lot Bro..You can Still Feel the Feelings of this poetry Coz U R Still A Indian By Heart...

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«Reply #26 on: April 16, 2010, 09:45:12 AM »
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BAHUT HI BAHUT HI KHOOB KHWAISH SAHAB....
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«Reply #27 on: April 16, 2010, 10:14:56 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 06, 2010, 12:19:39 AM
Bahut dhuk hua Padke Khwaish ji.bechare baccho par kitna bura asar hota hoga. .very sad.ek chotti si prayer hai meri taraf se Hyderabad ke liye .sabko mil ke prayer karna chaiye.sab kuch zaroor teek hoga. sad7 sad7

Almighty God we dedicate hyderabad to the honor and service and ask you to make it the abode of light,love,purity and peace.Let all that is pure ,tender  grow in dat country,and all that hinders Godly union and concord be driven far from it.father with faith i ask you to watch over the people of hyderabad and direct there footsteps in the way of truth.And let the beauty of the lord our God be
upon the children of that land.we thank you and praise your name.Amen.


Thanks A Million For Those Prayers Madhu. icon_flower

Those Prayers Have Been The Best Answer I Recieved For This Poetry..

It Was Indeed Heart-Touching Gesture by You..

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«Reply #28 on: April 27, 2010, 02:38:23 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 13, 2010, 05:56:12 PM
jindagi ko mahsoos karna koi aapse sikhe bhai......aur dil ko choona aapki ghazlon se.....aapki ghazal ko aapki soch ko mera salam....great job bro.
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Sanjeev Bhaiya,Aapne Itna Kuch Keh Diya Jiske main Bilkul Bhi Laayak Nahi..Aapka Tehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Dil Se Shukrya Sanjeev Bro...

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Quote from: drpandey on April 13, 2010, 07:02:03 PM
Jadeed kaifiat se labrez kalaam likha hai aapne khwaish ji..dil ko chho gaya..hazaron daad nazar karta hun..

Teh Dil Se Shukarguzaar Hoon Dr.Pandey ji jo aapne apna keemti waqt diya..Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aapka.. icon_flower
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