Aankhon se hi chhu lete ho "manjum"

by manjum on January 04, 2011, 07:13:08 AM
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lijie pash hai....

Ankhon se hi chhu lete ho.
gazab ajuba kar dete ho.

Murjhai bhigi palkon main,
sau sau sapne bhar dete ho.

Rat gaye sapnon main aakar,
jina mushkil kar dete ho.

Kaisi ye baaten karte ho,
dil ke raaz chura lete ho.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2011, 07:17:53 AM »
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good one manjum ji..bahut khoob..

likhte rahiye..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2011, 07:32:53 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya abhiji..

daad dete rahie khush rahie..
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2011, 07:38:21 AM »
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aha ahaa ahaa
kya baat hai wah.
aakhir kuch naya aur dikash khumari bhara likhwa hi dia mene.
mast mast Manju ji bahut khubsurat.
dil se daad le lo aap.
iska reply aaya hai deemaag me.
bas khus rahen.
"
thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2011, 07:41:17 AM »
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hunnn... thanks niralaji..

bahut bahut thanks...aapko..

sach main aapne likhwa hi lia... kuch naya..

mushkurane ki koshish nam  bhi karte hain.
bhale is wajah se ankhe hi chhalak jaen.

thanks
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2011, 08:02:52 AM »
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hmm
sahi hai ji sahi hai.
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aankhon ka nam hona bhi gar muskurahat hai
    ham to fir roz hi muskurate hain
""
hehehe
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2011, 08:08:31 AM »
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wah...

islie to karte hain mushkurane ki koshish
ki aankhon se aansu chhalak hi na jaya.

thanks niralaji
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2011, 08:13:54 AM »
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""
ghamo ki barsaath hai bhaari
chalo koi baat nahi--
khushiyon ki chatri le lo humari
      thodi der hume bhi bheeg lene do gamo ki baarish me
ye bhi dili khwahish hai humari
""
Usual SmileUsual SmileWinkingWinking
""
thanx
""
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2011, 08:16:23 AM »
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thanks apni chhatari dene ke lie par.........

tum mere aansu na ponchho
hath kahin na jal jayen.
mere gham awara hain,
tumko bhi na chhal jayen.

kahie....
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 08:20:15 AM »
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zabardast thread manjum ji.....
nirala jo u rocks
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 08:24:13 AM »
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thanks kasakji...

thanks niralaji ko bhi..
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2011, 08:40:17 AM »
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nirale andaaz me pochenge aansu
aya hai ek idea bada hi dhansuu
     haath na jalega mera
     chhale bhi na jayenge aur
aap bas dekhte rah jayenge
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2011, 08:43:48 AM »
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wah...wah...

kya hai wo idia....

mere gham kam honge kabhi,
kya pata.
mere aanshu bhi pochhe jaenge kabhi,
kya pata.
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2011, 08:54:14 AM »
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Nice Manjum JI
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2011, 08:58:36 AM »
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aapke gam bhi honge kam
soch soch ab na kar aankhen nam
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idea bhi batayenge ham
bas thoda intezaar to kar mere humdum
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thanx
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